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Hard To See On Rainy Days

It's raining and cold in my area today.
I have bad eyesight, it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.
After work, I drive home, so I need to be careful.
Everyone needs to be careful as well.


今日は私の住んでいる地域は雨が降って寒いです。
私は目が悪いので、雨が降る夕方になると見えにくくなります。
仕事の後、車で帰宅するので、気をつけないといけません。
皆さんも気をつけてください。

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Hard To See On Rainy Days

It's raining and cold in my area today.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon (evening) when it's raining.

After work, I drive home, sos I have to drive home after work, I need to be more careful.

more = more than usual due to the bad weather, dark and bad eye sight. It captures the 気をつけないといけません better.

Everyone needs to, please be careful as well.out there too!

Yours is correct too, but sounded more like a rule to follow.

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Stay safe and stay warm! Don't catch a cold like I did! 😣

It's raining and cold in my area today.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

Hard Tto See Oon Rainy Days

It's raining and cold in my area today.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

After work, I drive home, so I need to be careful.

Everyone needs to be careful as well.

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Good job! For titles all nouns and verbs are usually capitalized, but short connector words aren't!

Hope it warms up there!

Hard To See On Rainy Days

It's raining and cold in my area today.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

After work, I drive home,I have to drive home after work so I need to be careful.

The original sentence is correct, but I think this wording is more natural

Everyone else needs to be careful as well.

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I hate driving in the rain. Should you get some glasses? 🤔

It's Hard To See On Rainy Days

It's raining and cold in my area today.

You could also say it's rainy instead of raining

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

After work, I drive home, so I need to be careful.

Everyone else needs to be careful as well.

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LeahLeah

yesterday

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Thank you so much. 😀

Hard To See On Rainy Days


It's Hard To See On Rainy Days

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Hard Tto See Oon Rainy Days

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It's raining and cold in my area today.


It's raining and cold in my area today.

You could also say it's rainy instead of raining

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's raining and cold in my area today.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have bad eyesight, it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.


I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon when it's raining.

I have bad eyesight, so it's hard for me to see in the late afternoon (evening) when it's raining.

After work, I drive home, so I need to be careful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After work, I drive home,I have to drive home after work so I need to be careful.

The original sentence is correct, but I think this wording is more natural

After work, I drive home, so I need to be careful.

After work, I drive home, sos I have to drive home after work, I need to be more careful.

more = more than usual due to the bad weather, dark and bad eye sight. It captures the 気をつけないといけません better.

Everyone needs to be careful as well.


Everyone else needs to be careful as well.

Everyone else needs to be careful as well.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everyone needs to, please be careful as well.out there too!

Yours is correct too, but sounded more like a rule to follow.

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