Sept. 6, 2021
They are stronger than me
Few weeks ago I start training again.
I pick jogging to start because I (think) I am good at this.
Well, I did completed couples marathon in last 15 years.
So, each day jogging one hour isn’t hard for me.
I also thinking that was a personal goal.
After I jogging in the same sport hall for a week.
I notice a lot of people jogging at the same time with me.
There are few persons are older than me but jogging fast than me.
And other few persons comes to this sport hall more often than me.
Because of them I did feel a little angry!
What would you do?
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They are stronger than me
FA few weeks ago I started training again.
A few weeks ago I started training again.
I picked jogging to start with because (I (think) I am good at ithis.
I picked jogging to start with because (I think) I am good at it.
Whatever you put in parentheses should be completely removable without making the sentence grammatically incorrect.
Well, I didIn fact, I have completed a couples marathons in lthe past 15 years.
In fact, I have completed a couple marathons in the past 15 years.
So, each day jogging one hour each day isn’t hard for me.
So jogging one hour each day isn’t hard for me.
Natural to connect this to the previous sentence.
I also thinking that was a personal goal. I also thinking that was a personal goal.
Not sure what you mean here. You were thinking of a personal goal? Or you wanted an hour of jogging each day to be your personal goal? Or running a marathon again is a personal goal?
After I had been jogging in the same sport hallgym for a week.,
After I had been jogging in the same gym for a week,
"Sport hall" isn't a thing in English, you probably mean gym, which can either be a place with a lot of exercise equipment or a really big room to run in/play sports in, chiefly basketball.
I noticed a lot of people jogging at the same time withas me.
I noticed a lot of people jogging at the same time as me.
Connect to last sentence.
There are a few personsople who are older than me but jogginwho still jog faster than me.,
There are a few people who are older than me who still jog faster than me,
Above is what I think you meant, you might also have meant "there are few (people) older than me who jog faster than me," which is equivalent to "there are not many people who are older than me and also jog faster than me"
Aand other few personsa few others who comes to this sport halle gym more often than me.
and a few others who come to the gym more often than me.
Connect to previous sentence
Because of them I did feel a little angryI feel a little envious/jealous of them!
I feel a little envious/jealous of them!
What would you do?
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Few weeks ago I start training again.
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I pick jogging to start because I (think) I am good at this.
I picked jogging to start with because (I Whatever you put in parentheses should be completely removable without making the sentence grammatically incorrect. |
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Well, I did completed couples marathon in last 15 years.
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So, each day jogging one hour isn’t hard for me.
So Natural to connect this to the previous sentence. |
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I also thinking that was a personal goal. I also thinking that was a personal goal. I also thinking that was a personal goal. Not sure what you mean here. You were thinking of a personal goal? Or you wanted an hour of jogging each day to be your personal goal? Or running a marathon again is a personal goal? |
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After I jogging in the same sport hall for a week.
After I had been jogging in the same "Sport hall" isn't a thing in English, you probably mean gym, which can either be a place with a lot of exercise equipment or a really big room to run in/play sports in, chiefly basketball. |
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I notice a lot of people jogging at the same time with me.
I noticed a lot of people jogging at the same time Connect to last sentence. |
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There are few persons are older than me but jogging fast than me.
There are a few pe Above is what I think you meant, you might also have meant "there are few (people) older than me who jog faster than me," which is equivalent to "there are not many people who are older than me and also jog faster than me" |
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And other few persons comes to this sport hall more often than me.
Connect to previous sentence |
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Because of them I did feel a little angry!
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