Sept. 30, 2020
JoJo Rabit
99% comments you can found about this movie is excellent good.
I just watched.
The first time I saw the poster, I was thinking this is a comedy movie.
So, I ignore it.
But recently due to the virus (or thanks to the virus) affect.
Got too many free time stay at home.
Finally, I watched this movie.
Like I said above, anyone will tell you this is a best movie of 2020.
I do too.
The music, scenes, actors…even the story too.
But for me I am enjoy this film the whole time.
At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”.
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99% of the comments you can found about this movie ishas been excellent good.
99% of the comments found about this movie has been excellent.
I just watched it. I just watched it.
The first time I saw the poster, I was thinking this isthought it was going to be a comedy movie.
The first time I saw the poster, I thought it was going to be a comedy.
So, I just ignored it. So, I just ignored it.
But recently, due to the virus (or thanks to the virus), affect.
But recently, due to the virus (or thanks to the virus),
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I have had too much free time on my hands.
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I finally watched this movie.
Like I said above, anyone will tell youIn my opinion, this is athe best movie of 2020. Due to the high percentage of excellent comments, I believe many others agree with me.
In my opinion, this is the best movie of 2020. Due to the high percentage of excellent comments, I believe many others agree with me.
You did not say that it was the best movie of 2020, therefore, using "like I said above" is incorrect.
I do too.
TI love the music, the scenes, the actors…even the story too.
I love the music, the scenes, the actors…even the story.
But for me I am enjoyI must say I enjoyed watching this film the wholentire time.
I must say I enjoyed watching this film the entire time.
At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”. At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”.
What culture shock? your readers will not understand what you mean by this and you need to expound on it.
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I liked the movie too, but probably not as much as you did. The idea was cute, but at times, it was a bit corny.
Oct. 1, 2020
corny is the right word i am looking for
JoJo Rabit
99% comments you can fouind about this movie isay that it's excellent good.
99% comments you can find about this movie say that it's excellent.
I just watched it. I just watched it.
The first time I saw the poster, I was thinking this ithought it was a comedy movie.
The first time I saw the poster, I thought it was a comedy movie.
We have to match the tenses in the sentence.
So, I ignored it. So, I ignored it.
But recently due to the virus (or thanks to the virus) affect.
But recently due to the virus (or thanks to the virus).
You don't need to use 'effect'.
'affect' is a verb --> The virus affected my life.
'effect' is a noun --> The effect of the virus
GotI had too manyuch free time stay at home.
I had too much free time at home.
Finally, I watched this movie.
Like I said above, anyone will tell you this is athe best movie of 2020.
Like I said above, anyone will tell you this is the best movie of 2020.
the --> the ONLY best movie of 2020
one of the best movies --> there are many good movies in 2020, this is one of the best.
It depends on what nuance you want.
I do too.
The music, scenes, actors…even the story too.
But for me I am enjoy this filmI enjoyed the whole timefilm.
I enjoyed the whole film.
At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”the culture shock made me feel uncomfortable.
At the same time the culture shock made me feel uncomfortable.
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Nice work! Just be careful with using past tense consistently. I'm glad you enjoyed the movie!
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The first time I saw the poster, I was thinking this is a comedy movie.
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So, I ignore it. So, I ignored it. So, I ignored it. So, I just ignored it. So, I just ignored it. |
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But recently due to the virus (or thanks to the virus) affect.
But recently due to the virus (or thanks to the virus) You don't need to use 'effect'. 'affect' is a verb --> The virus affected my life. 'effect' is a noun --> The effect of the virus
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Got too many free time stay at home.
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Finally, I watched this movie. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Like I said above, anyone will tell you this is a best movie of 2020.
Like I said above, anyone will tell you this is the --> the ONLY best movie of 2020 one of the best movies --> there are many good movies in 2020, this is one of the best. It depends on what nuance you want.
You did not say that it was the best movie of 2020, therefore, using "like I said above" is incorrect. |
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I do too. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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The music, scenes, actors…even the story too. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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But for me I am enjoy this film the whole time.
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At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”.
At the same time At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”. At the same time I also feel uncomfortable by the “culture shock”. What culture shock? your readers will not understand what you mean by this and you need to expound on it. |
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