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Fuji

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29th May 2025

Today, I made a sentences with my friend. My friend name is Yuho. But I was not ideaman, so I felt sorry for Yuho. When class finished I apologized for Yuho. Angela heard my word and she said “ Don’t say sorry. You did your best, right?” I said “Yes.”

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Today, I made a sentences with my friend.

Don't need the 'a'.

My friend's name is Yuho.

need the s to show possession.

But I was not ideaman, so I felt sorry for YuhoIt was Yuho who had all the ideas though.

ideaman isn't a real word

When class finished I apologized forto Yuho.

for Yuho means you apologised for how Yuho behaved, apologising TO Yuho is apologising for how YOU behave.

Angela heard my words and she said “ Don’t say sorry. You did your best, right?”. I said “Yes."

You should combine the 2 sentences into 1.

You did your best, right?” I said “Yes.”

As above.

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Well done.

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Fuji

May 31, 2025

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Thank you. Thank you for everything.

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29th May 2025

Today, I made a sentences with my friend.

Not sure what you mean here

My friend's name is Yuho.

But I was not an ideal man, so I felt sorry for Yuho.

This is a bit unclear too

When class finished I apologized forto Yuho.

Angela overheard my word and she said "Don’t say sorry.

You did your best, right?” I saireplied “Yes.”

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Good text!

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Fuji

May 31, 2025

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Thank you for correcting!

29th May 2025


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Today, I made a sentences with my friend.


Today, I made a sentences with my friend.

Not sure what you mean here

Today, I made a sentences with my friend.

Don't need the 'a'.

My friend name is Yuho.


My friend's name is Yuho.

My friend's name is Yuho.

need the s to show possession.

But I was not ideaman, so I felt sorry for Yuho.


But I was not an ideal man, so I felt sorry for Yuho.

This is a bit unclear too

But I was not ideaman, so I felt sorry for YuhoIt was Yuho who had all the ideas though.

ideaman isn't a real word

When class finished I apologized for Yuho.


When class finished I apologized forto Yuho.

When class finished I apologized forto Yuho.

for Yuho means you apologised for how Yuho behaved, apologising TO Yuho is apologising for how YOU behave.

Angela heard my word and she said “ Don’t say sorry.


Angela overheard my word and she said "Don’t say sorry.

Angela heard my words and she said “ Don’t say sorry. You did your best, right?”. I said “Yes."

You should combine the 2 sentences into 1.

You did your best, right?” I said “Yes.”


You did your best, right?” I saireplied “Yes.”

You did your best, right?” I said “Yes.”

As above.

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