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Allergies Are the Worst

I took a day off at work today.
I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.
I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.
The diagnosis was "pollen allergy".
My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.


今日は仕事をお休みしました。
先週から顔と首に湿疹が出ています。
先週の土曜日に湿疹が悪化したので、病院に行きました。
診断は花粉によるアレルギーでした。
顔が赤く腫れているので、更に2.3日お休みをもらいました。

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Allergies Are the Worst

I took a day off atfrom work today.

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.

Your sentence is fine. Here are two other ways to say it.

I've had an eczema outbreak on my face and neck since last week.

I've had an eczema flare-up on my face and neck since last week.

I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

Oh. You already new about "flare-up"😅

さすが

The diagnosis was that it was a "pollen allergy".

Here is another way

The diagnosis was that it was an allergic reaction to pollen.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so. So, I ended up taking a few more days off.

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I hope you feel better soon. 🙏🏿

Allergies Aare the Worst

I took a day off atfrom work today.

Here using "at work" somewhat sounds like you took day off, but are still spending the day at work.
More natural way to say it would be to say "took a day off from work"!

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.

I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

The diagnosis was "pollen allergy".

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

Just looked like an accidental copy of the beginning of the sentence.

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Good job writing even while not feeling great, hope you start to feel better!

お疲れ様、よくがんばったね!

I took a day off atfrom work today.

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.

I sawwent to see a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

Your version is correct too, but this is how I would say it usually and is also closer to your Japanese version.

The diagnosis was "pollen allergy".

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

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Oh no it has gotten worse eh! 😰 I have always heard that pollen allergies are pretty bad in Japan around this time of year, hope it goes away soon!

I took a day off at work today.

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.

I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

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You wrote well👏🏾👊🏾.

For me, it's lactose intolerance 😪.

I hope you're feeling better now.

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LeahLeah

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I imagine lactose intolerance is hard for you.
Let's look out for each other.

Thank you for correcting my writing.
I'm not sure why the last part, "My face is red and swollen," overlaps with the previous sentence.
I think maybe I wrote it. 😆

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Toluwani

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Okay 👍.

You are welcome :)

Allergies Are the Worst


Allergies Aare the Worst

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I took a day off at work today.


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I took a day off atfrom work today.

I took a day off atfrom work today.

Here using "at work" somewhat sounds like you took day off, but are still spending the day at work. More natural way to say it would be to say "took a day off from work"!

I took a day off atfrom work today.

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've had eczema on my face and neck since last week.

Your sentence is fine. Here are two other ways to say it. I've had an eczema outbreak on my face and neck since last week. I've had an eczema flare-up on my face and neck since last week.

I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I sawwent to see a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

Your version is correct too, but this is how I would say it usually and is also closer to your Japanese version.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I saw a doctor because the eczema flared up last Saturday.

Oh. You already new about "flare-up"😅 さすが

The diagnosis was "pollen allergy".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The diagnosis was that it was a "pollen allergy".

Here is another way The diagnosis was that it was an allergic reaction to pollen.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.


My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so I ended up taking a few more days off.

Just looked like an accidental copy of the beginning of the sentence.

My face is red and swollen, so My face is red and swollen, so. So, I ended up taking a few more days off.

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