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Night Mare (94)

I had a night mare last night.

Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.

In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I barely made a little bit of voice.

I was trying making a voice over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voice.

And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I work up.

I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.

I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released from the scary dream."

I don't want to have a night mare any more


昨夜とても怖い夢を見ました。

実は、どんな夢だったかよく覚えていませんが、とても怖かったことだけ覚えています。

夢の中で、私は助けて!と叫ぼうとしましたが、かすかな小さな声しかでませんでした。

何度も何度も声を出そうとしましたが、全然大きな声が出ませんでした。

そして、突然猫の鳴き声が聞こえて、目が覚めました。

私は夢を見ていたことに気がついて、そして私の猫がベットの横で鳴いていました。

私は「あー助かった!猫のおかげで怖い夢から解放された」とほっとしました。

もう怖い夢は見たくないです。

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I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.

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I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.

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I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.

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Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.

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I had a night mare last night.


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Night Mare (94)


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Often "night mare" is spelled as ONE WORD. (See https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/nightmare. or https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/nightmare )

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