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meanbowler

Aug. 16, 2020

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My laud neighbor!

My neighbor is too laud two or three times a week. She invites her friends and they start talking very laud. Their conversation starts around 12:00 am and continues until 3 am. I usually go to bed at 12 am and at this time she starts talking loudly. She does not only talks but also laughs which can be a reason for a heart attack for anyone. When she laughs, the walls of my room shake. One night, I even shouted from my window and said " Shut up I want to sleep!". They were quiet for about three minutes, and then they started talking and laughing once again.

One night, I really got upset because I was not able to fall asleep, and the next day I had an exam. That night, I decided to complain to the hostel's administration, but I have not done it yet. I think I should knock her door one night, and show my interest in joining her party.

She is from Iran and speaks Persian. At the moment that I am typing this, she is singing a Persian song. She is a crazy girl. Sometimes, I think with myself that she might feel homesick, but it cannot be a reason to disturb others.

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Aug. 17, 2020

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When she laughs, the walls of my room shake.

One night, I even shouted from my window and said " Shut up I want to sleep!".

One night, I really got upset because I was not able to fall asleep, and the next day I had an exam.

I think I should knock her door one night, and show my interest in joining her party.

She is from Iran and speaks Persian.

She is a crazy girl.

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sade291

Aug. 17, 2020

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meanbowler

Aug. 17, 2020

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Their conversation starts around 12:00 am and continues until 3 am.


Their conversation noise starts around 12:00 am and continues until 3 am. The noise starts around 12:00 am and continues until 3 am.

My laud neighbor!


My laoud neighbour! My loud neighbour!

My laoud neighbor! My loud neighbor!

My neighbor is too laud two or three times a week.


My neighbour is too laoud, they are like this two or three times a week. My neighbour is too loud, they are like this two or three times a week.

My neighbor is too laoud two or three times a week. My neighbor is too loud two or three times a week.

She invites her friends and they start talking very laud.


She invites her friends over and they start talking very laoud.ly She invites her friends over and they start talking very loudly

She invites her friends and they start talking very laoudly. She invites her friends and they start talking very loudly.

Loud is the adjective (the neighbor is loud) and loudly is the corresponding adverb (they talk loudly).

I usually go to bed at 12 am and at this time she starts talking loudly.


I usually go to bed at 12 am and at this time she starts talking loudly. I usually go to bed at 12 am.

No need to add again about how this is when she talks loudly as it was already mentioned in the previous sentence.

She does not only talks but also laughs which can be a reason for a heart attack for anyone.


She does not only talks but also laughs which can be a rheason for a heart attackdache for anyone. She does not only talk but also laughs which can be a headache for anyone.

This was makes more sense. Normally people say that noise is a “headache” or gives them a headache. Not heart attack

When she laughs, the walls of my room shakes.


One night, I even shouted from my window and said " Shut up I want to sleep!".


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They were quiet for about three minutes, and then they started talking and laughing once again.


They were quiet for about three minutes, and then they startcontinued talking and laughing once again. They were quiet for about three minutes, and then they continued talking and laughing.

“Continued” is a better word to use as it highlights that they were already talking and laughing previously.

One night, I really got upset because I was not able to fall asleep, and the next day I had an exam.


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That night, I decided to complain to the hostel's administration, but I have not done it yet.


That night, I decided tothought about complaining to the hostel's administration, but I have not done it yet. That night, I thought about complaining to the hostel's administration, but I have not done it yet.

If you say “I decided to” it gives the impression you done it. So saying “I decided to but I didn’t do it yet” doesn’t make sense.

I think I should knock her door one night, and show my interest in joining her party.


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I think I should knock on her door one night, and show my interest in joining her party. I think I should knock on her door one night, and show my interest in joining her party.

She is from Iran and speaks Persian.


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At the moment that I am typing this, she is singing a Persian song.


At the moment that I am typing this, sShe is singing a Persian song. whilst I am typing this. She is singing a Persian song whilst I am typing this.

At the moment thatwhere I am typing this, she is singing a Persian song. At the moment where I am typing this, she is singing a Persian song.

She is a crazy girl.


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Sometimes, I think with myself that she might feel homesick, but it cannot be a reason to disturb others.


Sometimes, I think withto myself that she might be feeling homesick, but it cannot bethat’s not a reason to disturb others. Sometimes, I think to myself that she might be feeling homesick, but it that’s not a reason to disturb others.

Sometimes, I think withto myself that she might feel homesick, but it cannot be a reason to disturb others. Sometimes, I think to myself that she might feel homesick, but it cannot be a reason to disturb others.

When she laughs, the walls of my room shake.


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