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vTuber - Kuwagata Nano

Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.

I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.
I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.
I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.

I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..

Relationship between her and her community is interesting.

As I said before, many streamers always act nice like “I appreciate you! I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”
This is fine, but it's typical.

On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.
However, they trust and care for each other, actually.
They have built a really nice and welcoming community.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.

Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately.
Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.


I mistakenly said she was an Australian , but actually, she is an Austrian. She has just pointed it out.

I knew that she was an Austrian and her first language was German. I don't know why I wrote that at the first place.

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vTuber - Kuwagata Nano

I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.

I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.

I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”

This is fine, but it's typical.

They have built a really nice and welcoming community.

Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.

I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.

Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.

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TarYosh

Dec. 17, 2022

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vTuber - Kuwagata Nano

Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.

When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.

They have built a really nice and welcoming community.

Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.

I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.

Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.

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TarYosh

Dec. 17, 2022

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Dec. 17, 2022

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vTuber - Kuwagata Nano

When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.

I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.

As I said before, many streamers always act nice like “I appreciate you!

This is fine, but it's typical.

On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.

They have built a really nice and welcoming community.

Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.

She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams.

I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.

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TarYosh

Dec. 17, 2022

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Relationship between her and her community is interesting.


RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting. The relationship between her and her community is interesting.

RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting. The relationship between her and her community is interesting.

RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting. The relationship between her and her community is interesting.

This requires 'the' at the start of the sentence.

RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting. The relationship between her and her community is interesting.

vTuber - Kuwagata Nano


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vVTuber - Kuwagata Nano VTuber - Kuwagata Nano

The 'v' in VTuber is always capitalized.

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Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.


Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese. Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.

Your sentence is grammatically correct, but here is a slightly more natural way to say it: "...sings in Japanese despite not speaking it."

Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vVTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japaneseit. Kuwagata Nano is an Australian VTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand it.

Using japanese twice is repetitive in this sentence.

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Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girlwoman who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese. Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber woman who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.

I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.


I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers. I got to know about her because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.

I got to know about her, because she has collaborated with one of my favorite streamers. I know about her because she has collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.

'I got to know her' is a phrase but it is strange to use it with about.

I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers. I got to know about her because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.

No need for a comma here.

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When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.


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When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat. When I first visited her livestream, she was yelling at a viewer in chat.

Your sentence isn't incorrect but this is a more natural way to say it in the US.

I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.


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I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice. I thought that she was interesting because many streamers always try to be nice.

No need for a comma here.

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I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.


I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then. I remember I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.

I remember that I said to her, “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then. I remember that I said to her, “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.

You need to specify who you are saying something to here.

I remember that I said in chat at the time, “I love your style of chat moderation style!” in the chat then.!” I remember that I said in chat at the time, “I love your style of chat moderation!”

I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..


I simply thought she was just a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found outover time I came to learn that she was a really nice person whileas I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc.. I thought she was just a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but over time I came to learn that she was a really nice person as I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..

"find out" describes an instantaneous revelation. Your realisation was "gradual" so "find out" isn't appropriate here.

I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc.. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc.

I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person w. While I visited her live streams andI joined her discord server, etc.. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person. While I visited her live streams I joined her discord server.

This sentence is way too long. You need to break it up into at least two seperate sentences.

I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person whilen I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc.. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person when I visited her livestreams and joined her discord server, etc.

As I said before, many streamers always act nice like “I appreciate you!


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As I said before, many streamers always act nice likejust to say “I appreciate you"! As I said before, many streamers always act nice just to say “I appreciate you"!

Sounds ackward, needs to be reworded. The exclaimation mark needs to be closed at the quotation.

As I said before, many streamers always act nice like, “I appreciate you! As I said before, many streamers always act nice like, “I appreciate you!

I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”


I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “IWe love you, Iwe will always support you, [streamer]!” I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “We love you, we will always support you [streamer]!”

I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!” I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”

Don't really understand what you are trying to say here, maybe a rewording is in order.

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This is fine, but it's typical.


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On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.


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On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes aslike when I first visited her live stream, and the viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game. On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes like when I first visited her live stream, and the viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.

On the other hand, she yellsed at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often sayid things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game. On the other hand, she yelled at the chat sometimes when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often said things like “You deserve it!” when she screwed up in a game.

'yells' is the present tense, should be 'yelled' for the past tense. The same for 'say' and 'said', one is present tense and the other is past tense,you are speaking about the past but using present tense grammer.

On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like , “You deserved it!” when she screweds up in a game. On the other hand, she yells at chat sometimes as when I first visited her livestream, and viewers often say things like, “You deserved it!” when she screws up in a game.

According to my son, we can personify chat.

However, they trust and care for each other, actually.


However, theNonetheless, they actually trust and care for each other, actually. Nonetheless, they actually trust and care for each other.

However, Actually. they trust and care for each other, actually. Actually. they trust and care for each other.

This correction sound a lot smoother.

However, tThey trust and care for each other, actually. They trust and care for each other, actually.

They have built a really nice and welcoming community.


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Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.


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Actually, it’s nicer than others in my opinion. Actually, it’s nicer than others in my opinion.

Others is also a plural ownership pronoun.

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She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams.


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She puts effort into communicating nicelybetter with viewers even outside her live streams. She puts effort into communicating better with viewers even outside her live streams.

'Nicely' really doesn't fit here, use better.

She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside of her live streams. She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside of her livestreams.

I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.


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I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that much. I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that much.

I added 'much' to sound a bit more natural.

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Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately.


Recently, I can’thaven't been able to visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately. Recently, I haven't been able to visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately.

Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of the time zones, unfortunately. Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of time zones, unfortunately.

Recently, I can’tUnfortunately, I was unable to visit her live stream recently because of the time zone, unfortunately difference. Unfortunately, I was unable to visit her live stream recently because of the time zone difference.

Recently, I can’thaven't been able to visit her live stream because of the time zone difference, unfortunately. Recently, I haven't been able to visit her livestream because of the timezone difference, unfortunately.

Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.


Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule. Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule.

Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule. Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule.

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