Jan. 23, 2026
Scone
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to it, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elements.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to it, which would help me supply me with electrolytes and trace elements.
"help me supply" - make you better able to give (to someone else)
"help supply me with" - help make sure you have
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Fun fact: Scone is one of those words in English where there's a lot of regional variation in how it's pronounced. For example, in Ireland, the south of England and usually in America it rhymes with cone, while in Scotland and the North of England and in some parts of America it rhymes with gone :)
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you so much for the correction and fun knowledge!
Have a nice weekend!
It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at making.
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend!
Scones
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It'sThey’re one of my favorite wWestern {desserts | breads}, and the only one I'm good at.
“Western” is capitalized when it refers to the West (but not capitalized when it’s merely a descriptor, as in “western Shanghai” or “western China”).
Scones aren’t usually considered desserts here.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins (to it, which wouldthem) to help me supply me with electrolytes and trace elements.
I would omit “to them.”
Suggestion:
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to give me extra minerals and electrolytes.
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I also like pumpkin seeds in my scones, but I’ve found that raisins often burn during baking, and I don’t like the taste of burnt raisins, so I’ve been using chopped-up pieces of dried mango instead. I really like the crunch of the pumpkin seeds combined with the chewiness of the dried mango. :-)
I hope you have a wonderful hike! I’m planning to go out this weekend, too.
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you!
The hike is fun, and tiring.
Have a nice weekend!
Scones
"Scone" works as a title here, but since your grasp of English is very good we focus on smaller details.
From the rest of your passage, you are explain you made more than one scone. So for your title you should use "Scones" instead of "Scone" to indicate you are referring to the entire collection of scones that you made and not 1 specific scone!
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to it, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elements.
You don't need the ",". Try reading the sentence as "This time, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elements". You can see that it is missing the "pumpkin seeds" and "raisins" to make the sentence make sense!
Also, trace elements sounds a little too scientific! A more common word to replace this would be "minerals".
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Great! This is pretty close to something my friends would say if they did the same thing!
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you so much for such detailed feedback!
Have a nice weekend!
Scone
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at making.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to it, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elementssupplies mineral nutrients to the body.
Minerals generally do this.
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Have a lovely hike 🙏🏾.
Jan. 24, 2026
谢谢！周末愉快😀
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It'sTheyre one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to ithem, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elements.
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend!
I made some scones for tomorrow's hike.
It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at.
This time, I added some pumpkin seeds and raisins to it, which would help me supply electrolytes and trace elements.
Jan. 24, 2026
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend!
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“Western” is capitalized when it refers to the West (but not capitalized when it’s merely a descriptor, as in “western Shanghai” or “western China”). Scones aren’t usually considered desserts here. It's one of my favorite western desserts, and the only one I'm good at making. |
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