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25 years after the Great Hanshin Earthquake

Kobe’s Great Hanshin-Awaji Earthquake happened on Jan. 17th, 1995.
This is from an article about that earthquake.

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”

I was 9 years old then.
There were my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at house in Osaka.
Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.

Few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house.
Her house in Kobe collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months.
Our house was too small and we seldom invited any friends until then.
I felt it was really unusual, and there was something emergency happening.

I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her.
She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me.
This memory will remain forever.
I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place called heaven.

In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido.
Electricity stopped, but my husband, son, and I were safe.
Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed still utilities were dead at many of buildings nearby my place.
I called some of my neighbor friends and their families to my small apartment.
I let them use shower, and made simple meals to them.
I strongly wanted to do something I could do then.

Sorry, today’s journal is very long.
I pray for the victims, and may the souls of them rest in peace.


阪神淡路大震災は1995年1月17日に起きました。
これはその地震についての記事です。
「マグニチュード7.3は日本の震度7に達し、6,434人が死亡した。43,000人が負傷し、316,000人が避難を余儀なくされた。およそ25万もの建物が半壊もしくは全壊した。」
私はその時9歳でした。
大阪の家には父、母、祖母、一番上の兄、二番目の兄、私がいました。
幸運にも、一枚のお皿が落ちて割れただけで、私たちはみんな無事でした。
数日後、祖母の義理の妹(祖父の妹)が私たちの家にやってきました。
神戸にある彼女の家が全壊したので、私たちの家に数ヶ月間滞在しました。
私達の家はとてもせまいので、それまでめったに友達を家に呼ぶことはありませんでした
私は普通じゃない、何か非常事態が起こっているのだと感じました。
私は幼すぎて全てを理解できなかったのですが、そのおばあちゃんと一緒にいることは本当に嬉しかったです。彼女はとても落ち着いていて、温かい人でした。いつも笑って、私と遊んでくれました。
この思い出は一生私の中に残ることでしょう。
今そのおばあちゃんは、天国という一番幸せな場所から、私にいつも微笑みかけてくれていることと信じています。
2018年に、北海道で大きな地震がありました。
電気は止まりましたが、夫と息子、私は無事でした。
すぐに私のマンションの電気は復旧しましたが、近くのたくさんの建物のライフラインはまだ止まっているようでした。
私は近くの友達とその家族をせまいマンションに呼びました。彼らにシャワーを使わせ、簡単なご飯を作りました。
私はその時、自分のできることをしたいと強く思ったのです。
すみません、今日の日記はとても長いです。
被災者の方々のご冥福をお祈りします。

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“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”

I was 9 years old then. There were my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at housme in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe had collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months. Our house was toovery small and we had seldom invited any friends to visit until then. I felt it was really unusual, and there was something emergency happening. I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her. She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me. This memory will remain with me forever. I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place, called heaven. In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido. Electricity stopped, but my husband, son, and I were safe. Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed stillthat utilities were still dead at many of buildings nearby my place. I called some of my neighboring friends and their families to my small apartment. I let them use my shower, and made simple meals tofor them. I strongly wanted to do somethingwhatever I could do then. Sorry, today’s journal is very long. I pray for the victims, and may their souls of them rest in peace.

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kyoko

Jan. 18, 2020

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Thank you for the correction.
I appreciate that you took effort for me.🙏🏻✨

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”I was 9 years old then. There wereas my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at the house in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months.Our house was too small and we seldom invited any friends until then.I felt it was really unusual, and there was something kind of emergency happening.I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her.She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me.This memory will remain with me forever.I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place called heaven.In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido.E The electricity stoppedwent out, but my husband, son, and I were safe.Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed stillthat the utilities still were dead atin many of the buildings nearby my place.I called some of my neighbor friends and their families to my small apartment.I let them use the shower, and made simple meals tofor them.I strongly wanted to do something I could do then.Sorry, today’s journal is very long.I pray for the victims, and may the souls of them rest in peace.

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kyoko

Jan. 17, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!
It took some time to check and correct this long journal.
I appreciate your efforts!🙏🏻✨

This is from an article about that earthquake.

The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.” I was 9 years old then.There were m My father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and mI were at housme in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe had collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months. Our house was too small and we had seldom even invited any friends until then.I felt itover before. I realized this was really unusual, and there was something emergencyterrible happening. I was too young to understand the whole thwhat was happening, but I was really happy to be with her. She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me. This memory will remain with me forever. I believe that now she always smiles at me from theat happiest of places called heaven. In 2018, there was a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido. Electricity stoppedwent out, but my husband, son, and I were safe. Soon, the power had returnwas restored in myour apartment, but it seemed stillthat the utilities were dead atstill not working in many of the buildings nearby my place.I call. I invited some of my neighbor friends and their families to myin the neighborhood to our small apartment. I let them ustake shower,s and made simple meals tofor them. I justrongly wanted to do somethingwhatever I could dto then.lp. Sorry, today’s journal is very long. I pray for the victims, and m. May their souls of them rest in peace.

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kyoko

Jan. 17, 2020

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Thank you for the correction.
I appreciate that you took time for me.🙏🏻✨

25 years after the Great Hanshin Earthquake


Kobe’s Great Hanshin-Awaji Earthquake happened on Jan.


17th, 1995.


This is from an article about that earthquake.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”I was 9 years old then.There were my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at house in Osaka.Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.Few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months.Our house was too small and we seldom invited any friends until then.I felt it was really unusual, and there was something emergency happening.I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her.She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me.This memory will remain forever.I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place called heaven.In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido.Electricity stopped, but my husband, son, and I were safe.Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed still utilities were dead at many of buildings nearby my place.I called some of my neighbor friends and their families to my small apartment.I let them use shower, and made simple meals to them.I strongly wanted to do something I could do then.Sorry, today’s journal is very long.I pray for the victims, and may the souls of them rest in peace.


The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.” I was 9 years old then.There were m My father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and mI were at housme in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe had collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months. Our house was too small and we had seldom even invited any friends until then.I felt itover before. I realized this was really unusual, and there was something emergencyterrible happening. I was too young to understand the whole thwhat was happening, but I was really happy to be with her. She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me. This memory will remain with me forever. I believe that now she always smiles at me from theat happiest of places called heaven. In 2018, there was a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido. Electricity stoppedwent out, but my husband, son, and I were safe. Soon, the power had returnwas restored in myour apartment, but it seemed stillthat the utilities were dead atstill not working in many of the buildings nearby my place.I call. I invited some of my neighbor friends and their families to myin the neighborhood to our small apartment. I let them ustake shower,s and made simple meals tofor them. I justrongly wanted to do somethingwhatever I could dto then.lp. Sorry, today’s journal is very long. I pray for the victims, and m. May their souls of them rest in peace.

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”I was 9 years old then. There wereas my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at the house in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months.Our house was too small and we seldom invited any friends until then.I felt it was really unusual, and there was something kind of emergency happening.I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her.She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me.This memory will remain with me forever.I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place called heaven.In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido.E The electricity stoppedwent out, but my husband, son, and I were safe.Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed stillthat the utilities still were dead atin many of the buildings nearby my place.I called some of my neighbor friends and their families to my small apartment.I let them use the shower, and made simple meals tofor them.I strongly wanted to do something I could do then.Sorry, today’s journal is very long.I pray for the victims, and may the souls of them rest in peace.

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.”

I was 9 years old then. There were my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at housme in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe.F A few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe had collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months. Our house was toovery small and we had seldom invited any friends to visit until then. I felt it was really unusual, and there was something emergency happening. I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her. She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me. This memory will remain with me forever. I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place, called heaven. In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido. Electricity stopped, but my husband, son, and I were safe. Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed stillthat utilities were still dead at many of buildings nearby my place. I called some of my neighboring friends and their families to my small apartment. I let them use my shower, and made simple meals tofor them. I strongly wanted to do somethingwhatever I could do then. Sorry, today’s journal is very long. I pray for the victims, and may their souls of them rest in peace.

“ The magnitude 7.3 quake, which reached the maximum of 7 on the Japanese seismic intensity scale, left 6,434 people dead, over 43,000 injured and forced more than 316,000 to evacuate. Nearly a quarter million buildings were heavily damaged or destroyed.” I was 9 years old then. There were my father, mother, grandmother, my eldest brother, second eldest brother, and me at house in Osaka. Fortunately, only one plate fell down and broke, and we were all safe. Few days later, my grandmother’s sister-in-law (my grandfather’s sister) came to our house. Her house in Kobe collapsed, so she stayed at our house for several months. Our house was too small and we seldom invited any friends until then. I felt it was really unusual, and there was something emergency happening. I was too young to understand the whole thing, but I was really happy to be with her. She was really calm and had a warm heart. She always smiled and played with me. This memory will remain forever. I believe that now she always smiles at me from the happiest place called heaven. In 2018, a big earthquake happened in Hokkaido. Electricity stopped, but my husband, son, and I were safe. Soon the power had returned in my apartment, but it seemed still utilities were dead at many of buildings nearby my place. I called some of my neighbor friends and their families to my small apartment. I let them use shower, and made simple meals to them. I strongly wanted to do something I could do then. Sorry, today’s journal is very long. I pray for the victims, and may the souls of them rest in peace.


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