Dec. 21, 2021
25-26-27 three days holiday
Some countries don’t have that three days as holiday.
I consider that is one of the best holidays for me.
Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends.
I can really make use this three day to get to know them more.
Getting acquaintance with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
Knowing them more is interesting just reading a story of life from another person.
Although I am already 50’s I still can learn many knowledges from young people.
Best decision I made in this year.
25-26-27 three days hChristmas Three-Day Holidays
Putting the numbers in the title sounds a bit odd
Some countries don’t have thatose three days as holidays.
"those" for plural
Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends.
I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more.
Getting acquaintanced with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
KnowGetting them more iso know them better is more interesting than just rheadring athe story of their life from another person.
Changed a few word choices for naturalness.
Although I am already in my 50’s, I still can learn many knowledgesuch from young people.
"knowledge" is basically never used in plural.
Best decision I made in this year.
Using "in" isn't that natural here
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Well-written :) Grammar-wise and judging by the sentence-structure, you did quite well, just some word choice mistakes.
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I can really make use this three day to get to know them more. I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more. |
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25-26-27 three days holiday
Putting the numbers in the title sounds a bit odd |
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Some countries don’t have that three days as holiday. Some countries don’t have th "those" for plural |
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I consider that is one of the best holidays for me. |
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Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Getting acquaintance with co-workers gives me confidence while working. Getting acquaint |
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Knowing them more is interesting just reading a story of life from another person.
Changed a few word choices for naturalness. |
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Although I am already 50’s I still can learn many knowledges from young people. Although I am already in my 50’s, I still can learn m "knowledge" is basically never used in plural. |
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Best decision I made in this year. Best decision I made Using "in" isn't that natural here |
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