Dec. 3, 2020
My first post
Hello to everyone!
This is the first time that I write to be reading. I usually do it, but I don't like too much the idea of someone else can know what I'm thinking about. Although, I hope with this exercise, improve my writings skills and be less shy with the world.
Thanks for reading!
¡Hola a todos!
Esta es la primera vez que escribo para ser leída. Usualmente lo hago, pero no me agrada mucho la idea de que otros puedan saber lo que estoy pensando. Sin embargo, espero que con este ejercicio pueda mejorar mi habilidad de escribir en inglés y ser menos tímida con el mundo.
¡Gracias por leer!
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My first post
Hello to everyone!
This is the first time that I am write to be readinging. I am usually reading other people's posts.
This is the first time that I am writing. I am usually reading other people's posts.
Not sure what you mean, but I've changed it to what I think makes sense.
Let me know if you meant something else.
I usually do it, but I don't like too muchread because I don't really like the idea of someone else can knowing what I'm thinking about.
I usually read because I don't really like the idea of someone else knowing what I'm thinking about.
Although, I hope with this exercise, I can improve my writings skills and be less shymore open with othe worldrs.
Although, I hope with this exercise, I can improve my writings skills and be more open with others.
"less shy with the world" makes grammatical sense, but doesn't sound very natural to me.
Thanks for reading!
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Awesome first attempt!
Dec. 3, 2020
This is the first time that I am write to be readinging. I am usually reading other people's posts.
Not sure what you mean, but I've changed it to what I think makes sense.
Let me know if you meant something else.
I meant that I usually write but anybody read it.
Dec. 3, 2020
Thanks for checking! I really appreciate it.
Dec. 4, 2020
I meant that I usually write but anybody read it.
Oh! I think you can say, 'this is the first time I'm writing publicly'
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Hello to everyone! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is the first time that I write to be reading.
This is the first time that I am writ Not sure what you mean, but I've changed it to what I think makes sense. Let me know if you meant something else. |
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I usually do it, but I don't like too much the idea of someone else can know what I'm thinking about.
I usually |
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Although, I hope with this exercise, improve my writings skills and be less shy with the world.
Although, I hope with this exercise, I can improve my writings skills and be "less shy with the world" makes grammatical sense, but doesn't sound very natural to me. |
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