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Today the topic that I reading and listening was about of the play when you were a children. The word or phrase that learning today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word, never I listen this word. In theme of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and just I know a few words :( Im so excited for looking my progress in one month
Today the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the playplaying when you were a childrenchild.
Today the topic that I readingread and listeninglistened to was about of the play when you were a childrenchild.
You can also say "what play was like as a child" instead of "the play when you were a children." This might sound more natural :)
The word or phrase that learningI learned today was hidey-hole., I liked so much this word, never so much! I listen this wordhave never heard it before.
In themeterms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and just I only know a few words :(
In English, we often say "in terms of" when we are defining the extent to which something occurred (for example, you might say, "I felt good about my audition in terms of how well I sang, but I do not think I am going to get the role because there were many other talented people there").
ImI'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month!
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This is great work overall. I'm also excited to see how you progress!
Today the topic that I readingread and listeninglistened to was about of the play when you were aabout children.
The word or phrase that learningI learned today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word so much, as I'd never I listenheard this word before.
InOn the theme of comprehension I feel good, but my vocabulary is slowlimited and just I just know a few words :(
ImI'm so excited for lookingto look at my progress in one month
Today the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a childrenchild.
The word or phrase that learningI learned today was hidey-hole., I liked so muchlike this word so much, but I've never I listen this word before.
In themeterms of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slowlow and just I just know a few words :(
ImI'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month.
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Good luck! Hidey-hole is a fun word to say :)
Today the topic that I readingread about and listeninglistened to was about of the play when you were ahow children play.
A shorter sentence helps to focus on the main point.
The word or phrase that learningI learned today was "hidey-hole.," I liked so much this word, never so much. I listen this wordnever heard it before.
Word order is different in your native language and English.
In theme of comprehension I feel good about my comprehension, but my vocabulary is slowlimited, and just I just know a few words :(
ImI'm so excited forto see my progress in one month. I'm looking forward to seeing my progress in one month.
Two ways to say the same thing,
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To practice English word order, write an English sentence on paper, and cut it up into pieces with 1-4 words on each piece. Then put the pieces in order. For example The word or phrase / that I learned / today was "hidey-hole." / I liked this word / so much. /I never heard / it before.
Today, the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a childrenchild.
(1) Punctuation. (2) verbs are in the wrong tense. (3) Use only about. (4) Children is plural, but here you mean singular
The word or phrase that learningI learned today was hidey-hole., I liked so much this word so much, never I listen this wordhad never heard it before.
Missing subject. The word order makes it confusing.
In themeterms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and just I just know a few words :(
Phrasing with the "In terms of ..." Word order also.
ImI'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month
Missing apostrophe. Phrasing again.
Overall feedback
You’re expressing your ideas clearly, which is great! Most of the issues are small grammar points like verb tense, word order, and choosing the right word. Once those are fixed, your writing flows naturally. Keep practicing! You’re already on the right track.
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