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After the first use of this website, I got the warm and useful feetback. I am really touched and trilled. With the help of Internet, people around the world are more close and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strange from different countries. That is amazing! What a wonderful website! Nice to meet you! And I am to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts and comperhension about books and films!
[email protected] This is my email address, and I am willing to hear from you to share your life and so on!

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Some thoughts

That is amazing!

What a wonderful website!

Nice to meet you!

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Some thoughts

That is amazing!

What a wonderful website!

Nice to meet you!

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Some tThoughts. Some Thoughts.

Capitalization rules on your title.

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After the first use of this website, I got the warm and useful feetback.


After the first use of this website, I got theusing this website for the first time, I received warm and usehelpful feetdback. After using this website for the first time, I received warm and helpful feedback.

"Got" is informal and "received" sounds more natural in this context. "Feetback" seems to be a typo for "feedback," which is the correct spelling. "Useful" is a bit awkward here, so "helpful" works better.

After themy first use of this website, I got the warm and useful feetdback. After my first use of this website, I got warm and useful feedback.

After themy first use of this website, I got thereceived warm and useful feetdback. After my first use of this website, I received warm and useful feedback.

In this context, “received” maintains a more appropriate tone instead of “got.” Feedback was also spelled wrong, and “helpful” makes more sense than “useful” in this context because helpful is more natural when talking about feedback, but useful could also work.

I am really touched and trilled.


I am really touched and thrilled. I am really touched and thrilled.

Trilled is a typo.

I am really touched and thrilled. I am really touched and thrilled.

I am really touched and thrilled. I am really touched and thrilled.

With the help of Internet, people around the world are more close and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strange from different countries.


With the help of Ithe internet, people around the world are more closeconnected and it is easyier for me to exchange ideas with stranger from different countries. With the help of the internet, people around the world are connected and it is easier for me to exchange ideas with stranger from different countries.

"Internet" should be preceded by "the" because it refers to a specific, universally known entity. Additionally, "internet" is usually not capitalized unless it's at the beginning of a sentence. The proper phrase is "more connected," as it refers to the increased ability to interact with people from all over the world, which is the idea you're trying to convey. "Strange" is an adjective, but in this context, you need the noun "strangers" to refer to people you don't know.

With the help of the Internet, people around the world are more closer and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strangers from different countries. With the help of the Internet, people around the world are closer and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strangers from different countries.

Most people don’t capitalize “internet” anymore.

With the help of Ithe internet, people around the world are more closer, and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strangers from different countries. With the help of the internet, people around the world are closer, and it is easy for me to exchange ideas with strangers from different countries.

Internet needs a definite article. In this case it would be “the internet.” “More close” was changed to “closer” because that’s the correct comparative form of close. “Strange” should be “strangers.”

That is amazing!


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What a wonderful website!


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Nice to meet you!


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And I am to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts and comperhension about books and films!


And I am eager to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts and comperehension about books and films! I am eager to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts and comprehension about books and films!

"I am eager to make friends with you" better expresses your excitement and willingness to connect. "Comperhension" is a misspelling of "comprehension"

And I am {hoping | eager} to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts and comperhension about books and films! And I am {hoping | eager} to make friends with you and exchange our thoughts about books and films!

We don’t usually say that we exchange “comprehension.” “Exchange comprehension” isn’t an idiomatic expression.

And I amI look forward to makeing friends with you and exchangeing our thoughts and comperhensionunderstanding about books and films!. I look forward to making friends with you and exchanging our thoughts and understanding about books and films.

Rephrased to “I look forward to making friends with you” for more clarity and better flow. “Understanding” is a better word choice than “comprehension” in this context.

[email protected] This is my email address, and I am willing to hear from you to share your life and so on!


[email protected] This is my email address, and I am willing: [email protected]. I would be happy to hear from you toand share your lifeves and so onexperiences! This is my email address: [email protected]. I would be happy to hear from you and share our lives and experiences!

It's clearer to place your email address within the sentence and to rephrase the second part for better flow. "I would be happy to hear from you" sounds more polite and natural than "I am willing to hear from you," and "share our lives and experiences" is a smoother expression.

[email protected] This is my email address, and I am willing to hear from you to share about your life and so on! [email protected] is my email address, and I am willing to hear from you to share about your life and so on!

[email protected] This is my email address, and I am willingeager to hear from you toand share yabout our lifeves and so onmore! [email protected] This is my email address, and I am eager to hear from you and share about our lives and more!

Changed for more natural phrasing and polishing

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