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A Lesson I Learnt

I went on hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose. We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparing to my usual night routine.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful. You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw

However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up. My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt:

1. Don't have massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition.
2. Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

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Jan. 20, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

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Jan. 19, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt

I went on hike yesterday, as usual.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

2.

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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt


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I went on hike yesterday, as usual.


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The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.


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You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.


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So that's what I've learnt: 1.


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We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.


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I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparing to my usual night routine.


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Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.


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