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Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are overall goodbeneficial.

You could also use "beneficial" here in place of "good" to make it more academic sounding.

To begin, internetsocial media has created more opportunities to earn extra money. //OR// To begin, the internet and social media have created more opportunities to earn extra money.

Are you talking about the internet and social media or just social media? I gave two options depending on which one you want to use.

Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profits by attracting audience and new customers.

It is more clear this way.

For instance, my mother, who is athe CEO of a small crochet business, haves doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily ion her Instagram account.

There is usually only one CEO of a business, so it would be ''the" instead of "a", "has" because we are talking about your mother. In English you "post on social media" or "post on the internet"

Additionally, people can get valuable skills by creating content for social media.

On the other hand, some otherspeople think that it creates addiction and therefore social media is a bad thing for society.

However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and settime by setting a specific time to do use these applications.

setting a specific time is a way to control the time you spend scrolling

In conclusion, I think that social media haves created more economic opportunities for smalls business and ordinary people, and also have madetaught people getting valuable skills.

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Although there are some risks to consider related to the addition of its use, I tend to believe that there are ways to control its excessive usage.

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