March 8, 2023
230307-An Outdoor Tour on the Heights
The sunshine was a long-lost friend. And I decided to hang out to enjoy it. The wind was still a little chilly, but I could feel that spring was coming. My money tree is sprouting and I would love to buy some pebbles and decorations for its pot.
I visited a friend who lives in the Heights. This area is near Hoboken, but the vibe is different. The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very well. Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cents discount markets. Things there are plain and basic, but I successfully bought an Angola hat in a vintage style at a good sale price. I also bought a lemonade from a Mexico convenience store, and its glass bottle is beautiful, I think it could work as a vase in the future. I also enjoy artists' graffiti on the wall, creative!
My friend is a brand shopaholic who usually preys on quality goods in big malls. He is not very satisfied with his home now, but the low rent fixes up most of his discontent. And he said that lifestyle shows who we are, I agree with him. I love to hang around at the street stops, because supporting the local economy is important, and they can give me a new perspective on how residents live their daily life.
Since spring is coming, I would ferret out more about where I live. Actually, I live in Hoboken for half a year, and I walk around some famous places, but I don't fit into this small and beautiful mile city closely, because Manhatten is so close, being a fake New Yorker is more attractive for past me. But one thing that happens yesterday changes my mind and I think it's a lot of pity that I ignore to learn more about my community.
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The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very wellgood.
Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cents discount markets.
I also bought a lemonade from a Mexicoan convenience store, and its glass bottle is beautiful, I think it could work as a vase in the future.
But one something that happensed yesterday changesd my mind and I think it's a lot of pitypitiful that I ignore tod learning more about my community for so long.
rather than pitiful it would sound more natural to say something like "I feel bad that i....." or "it's sad that...."
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March 24, 2023
Thanks zephora_lang, the suggestions are so practical!
230307-An Outdoor Tour on tf The Heights
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My money tree is sprouting and I would love to buy some pebbles and decorations for its pot.
I visited a friend who lives in the Heights.
This area is near Hoboken, but the vibe is different.
The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very wellgood.
Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cents discount markets.
Things there are plain and basic, but I successfully bought an Aangola hat in ra vintage style hat at a good sale price.
Congratulations!
I also bought a lemonade from a Mexicoan convenience store, and its glass bottle is beautiful,. I think it could work as a vase in the future.
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I'm hanging on tenterhooks waiting for the next part! I love how you described The Heights. It's almost as if I'm right there with you. Very nice work!
March 24, 2023
Thank you so much, Mari! My spring break was fun. I would continue to write my trips! Here's hoping that my writing skills haven't taken a vacation too!
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And I decided to hang out to enjoy it.
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The wind was still a little chilly, but I could feel that spring was coming. The wind was still a little chilly, but I could feel that |
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My money tree is sprouting and I would love to buy some pebbles and decorations for its pot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I visited a friend who lives in the Heights. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This area is near Hoboken, but the vibe is different. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very well. The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very The Heights is more diversified and has many fantastic restaurants, but the economy is not very |
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Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cents discount markets. Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cent Most shops on the central avenue are 99 cent |
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Things there are plain and basic, but I successfully bought an Angola hat in a vintage style at a good sale price. Things there are plain and basic, but I successfully bought an Congratulations! |
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I also bought a lemonade from a Mexico convenience store, and its glass bottle is beautiful, I think it could work as a vase in the future. I also bought a lemonade from a Mexic I also bought a lemonade from a Mexic |
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I also enjoy artists' graffiti on the wall, creative! I also enjoy artists' graffiti on the wall |
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My friend is a brand shopaholic who usually preys on quality goods in big malls. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is not very satisfied with his home now, but the low rent fixes up most of his discontent. He is not very satisfied with his home now, but the low rent |
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And he said that lifestyle shows who we are, I agree with him.
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I love to hang around at the street stops, because supporting the local economy is important, and they can give me a new perspective on how residents live their daily life. I love to hang out around Nice! |
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Since spring is coming, I would ferret out more about where I live. Since |
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Actually, I live in Hoboken for half a year, and I walk around some famous places, but I don't fit into this small and beautiful mile city closely, because Manhatten is so close, being a fake New Yorker is more attractive for past me. Actually, I've lived in Hoboken for half a year, and I walk around some famous places, but I don't fit into this small and beautiful mile city |
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But one thing that happens yesterday changes my mind and I think it's a lot of pity that I ignore to learn more about my community. But But rather than pitiful it would sound more natural to say something like "I feel bad that i....." or "it's sad that...." |
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