Jan. 31, 2023
230130 - A game and its impression
I have not written for a long time. Firstly I give a short excuse for my absence.
Last year I had a great Christmas with dozens of my friends. I also have an excellent situationship ( an internet word about a romantic relationship that is not considered to be formal or established) with one of my best friends. The feeling is sweet but also complex, I am obsessed but now I am calm. I still have a lot of things to learn and to write about American dating culture. I think it is a literally interesting topic to write about. (Would I be the next Carrie? Just show me where is my Mr.Big in New York, lmao)
Today I watched a video about playing a game, This War Is Mine. I fell into it and felt the same sorrow and happiness as the YouTuber. Not everybody in a war is a soldier. For a normal person, survival is hard in an unpeace time. Though we could still pull ourselves up by helping others, reading, enjoying music, and keeping the fire of the hope to union with our loves.
This game has an important meaning for me. It encourages me to face my memory of the lockdown I experienced. That nightmare really changed me and for a long time, I just burn them into my heart and never talk it in the most real tongue for the people I know and unknown. It destroyed my belief in many things so I just wanna run away. But the game reminds me of many TRIVAL kindnesses that protect me from being broken. The gate of my memory is open and many things flood now. I can't stand crying now, but I now accept myself.
I would write more about that experiences in future. This year I have three wishes: learn basic Spanish; become an elegant front-end web developer; and write my first storybook. Writing in English is a little hard for me to pick the best words to describe my feelings, but with your help, I have faith that I would do my best.
I have not written for a long time.
Firstly I give a short excuse for my absence.
Firstly, I'll give a short excuse for my absence.
Last year I had a great Christmas with dozens of my friends.
I also have an excellent situationship ( an internet word about a romantic relationship that is not considered to be formal or established) with one of my best friends.
I still have a lot of things to learn and to write about American dating culture.
I think it i's a literallyn interesting topic to write about.
Literally here sort of undercuts the truthfulness of the statement
Not everybody in a war is a soldier.
For a normal person, survival is hard in an unpeace wartimes.
This game has an important meaning for me.
It encourages me to face my memory of the lockdown I experienced.
This year I have three wishes: learn basic Spanish; become an elegant front-end web developer; and write my first storybook.
Jan. 31, 2023
Thanks sebobafett, your correction about how to describe wartime is accurate and I will pay more attention to the tense I use. Hope you have a good day!
230130 - A game and its impressionMy Impression of a Game
This sounds more natural in the US.
I have not written for a long time.
Firstly I, I'll give a shortbrief excuse for my absence.
Welcome back!
Last year I had a great Christmas with dozens of my friends.
I also have an excellent situationship ( an internet word about a romantic relationship that is not considered to be formal or established) with one of my best friends.
Thank you for defining situationship. I hadn't heard of it before. Also, congratulations!
The feeling is sweet but also complex,. I amwas obsessed but now I am calm.
Good for you!
I still have a lot of things to learn and to write about American dating culture.
I think it is a literallwill be a very interesting topic to write about.
(Wouldill I be the next Carrie? Just show me where is my Mr.Big is in New York, lmao)
Today I watched a video about playing athe game, This War Is Mine.
I fell into it and felt the same sorrow and happiness as the YouTuber.
Not everybody in a war is a soldier.
For a normal person, survival is hard during an unpeace time time of war, though we could still pull ourselves up by helping others, reading, enjoying music, and keeping the fire of hope alive to reunite with our loved ones.
Though we could still pull ourselves up by helping others, reading, enjoying music, and keeping the fire of the hope to union with our loves.
This is a sentence fragment.
This game has an important meaning for me.
It encourages me to face my memory of the lockdown I experienced.
That nightmare really changed me and, for a long time, I just burned themose feelings into my heart and never talk it in the most real tongue fored about them honestly with the people I know and undon't known.
This is a very beautiful sentence.
It destroyed my belief in many things so I just wannated to run away but the game reminds me of the many little kindnesses that protected me from being broken.
Wow, this is so sweet!
But the game reminds me of many TRIVAL kindnesses that protect me from being broken.
This is also a sentence fragment.
The gate of my memory is open and many things are flooding in now.
This is another beautiful sentence.
I can't stand my crying now, but I now accept myself.
Good for you! I wasn't sure what you meant so this is my best guess.
I wouldill write more about that experiences in future.
or
I will write more about those experiences in future.
that → singular
those → plural
This year I have three wishes: learn basic Spanish; become an elegant front-end web developer; and write my first storybook.
Writing in English is a little hard for me to pick the best words to describe my feelings, but, with your help, I have faith that I wouldill do my best.
Yay!
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I think you're doing very well expressing your feelings. You write very beautifully and you've improved since the last time you wrote. You'll be okay! Excellent work!
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I think it is a literally interesting topic to write about. I think it I think it Literally here sort of undercuts the truthfulness of the statement |
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Though we could still pull ourselves up by helping others, reading, enjoying music, and keeping the fire of the hope to union with our loves.
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It encourages me to face my memory of the lockdown I experienced. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That nightmare really changed me and for a long time, I just burn them into my heart and never talk it in the most real tongue for the people I know and unknown. That nightmare really changed me and, for a long time, I just burned th This is a very beautiful sentence. |
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It destroyed my belief in many things so I just wanna run away. It destroyed my belief in many things so I just wan Wow, this is so sweet! |
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But the game reminds me of many TRIVAL kindnesses that protect me from being broken.
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The gate of my memory is open and many things flood now. The gate of my memory is open and many things are flooding in now. This is another beautiful sentence. |
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I can't stand crying now, but I now accept myself. I can't stand my crying Good for you! I wasn't sure what you meant so this is my best guess. |
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This year I have three wishes: learn basic Spanish; become an elegant front-end web developer; and write my first storybook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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