Which one where do you want to travel? Where do you want to travel?

We don't need both Which one and where here, to use Which I would say something like, 'Which countries do you want to travel to?'

Which one wcountries do you want to travel to? or you could say, Where do you want to travel to? Which countries do you want to travel to? or you could say, Where do you want to travel to?

The second option doesn't specify countries, whereas the first does.

I want to taravel to a lot of countries- including Spain, Portutogal, Turkey, Japan, New-z Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand. I want to travel to a lot of countries including Spain, Portugal, Turkey, Japan, New Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand.

Some spelling mistakes, should write 'travel to', I would preference saying 'including' instead of using a dash here

I want to taravel to a lot of countries- - Spain, Portutogal, Turkey, Japan, New-zealand, Indonesia and Thailand. I want to travel to a lot of countries - Spain, Portugal, Turkey, Japan, New-zealand, Indonesia and Thailand.

Mostly a few spelling errors here and the punctuation period at the end to indicate the sentence has finished.

ORecently, one of Cthe countries where I most want to travel is Bail ofto the most is Bali, in Indonesia recently. Recently, one of the countries where I want to travel to the most is Bali, in Indonesia.

Better to put recently first here. We say Bali 'in' Indonesia. Sounds more natural to say 'where I want to travel to the most'

One of the Countries where I most want to travel to recently is Bail ofin Indonesia recently. One of the Countries where I most want to travel to recently is Bail in Indonesia.

Adding "the" between of and countries helps give the reader or listeners context, in this sentence it shows that Bali is part of the list of countries you have mentioned. I have changed Bali of Indonesia to Bali in Indonesia, both are technically correct however using "in" is more common.

Because I was showed my IG algorithm about thershowed me some videos of the place. Because my IG algorithm showed me some videos of the place.

Makes a little more sense. Sorry if I am changing too much.

Because I was showed my IG algorithmThis is because my IG algorithm showed me lots of posts about ithere. This is because my IG algorithm showed me lots of posts about it.

Because I was showed my IG algorithm aboutkeeps showing me there. Because my IG algorithm keeps showing me there.

I have replaced "I was showed" with "keeps showing me" and moved it to the end.

Because I was showed my IG algorithm about thereshowed me those places. Because my IG algorithm showed me those places.

But I have been... I was there a year ago. But... I was there a year ago.

The ellipsis "..." adds some personality to the sentence :)

But I have beenwas there a year ago. But I was there a year ago.

"Was" is used here because you have indicated the time when you were there.

But I have bewent there a year ago. But I went there a year ago.

but wWhen I show myee these posts on IG, there isare new places to see and things to do in Baili. When I see these posts on IG, there are new places to see and things to do in Bali.

added some words and usage of 'show' not quite right

but when I showee my IG, there isare new places and things in Bail but when I see my IG, there are new places and things in Bail

"see" is used because you are receiving the video. IG is showing the video to you. "Are" replaces "is" because Bali has multiple new places and things to see and do.

So I wannat to travel there again. So I want to travel there again.

Added 'there'

If iI travel again there, Ithere again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running whith some people whoI meet for the first time. If I travel there again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running with some people I meet for the first time.

OoOOo this is a nice idea!!

If iI travel again there, Ithere again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running whith some people who meetI met the first time. If I travel there again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running with some people who I met the first time.

capital I, there before 'again', usage of 'will' for future. Not sure if I got the meaning right, if you are saying you already met the people last time and you will run with them again next time.

If i travel again there, Ithere again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running whith some people who meetI have just met for the first time. If i travel there again, I will enjoy more Beach clubs and try running with some people who I have just met for the first time.

"I have just met" gives the context in a way that is more natural to english speakers. The way you wrote it is understandable but relies on implications.

If iI travel again there, Ithere again, I want to enjoy more Bbeach clubs and try running whith some people who I meet for the first time. If I travel there again, I want to enjoy more beach clubs and try running with some people who I meet for the first time.

And I wanna try other exercise -I also want to try other activities like yoga, climbing, and surfing. I also want to try other activities like yoga, climbing and surfing.

Generally try not to start sentence with And.

And I wanna try other exercise - yoga, climbing, surfing And I wanna try other exercise - yoga, climbing, surfing

Adding "ing" changes it from a verb to a noun. Climb - Climbing Surf - Surfing

Which one wherecountry do you want to travel to other country? Which country do you want to travel to?

Same as title, we should use either 'where' or which, not both

Which one where dDo you want to travel to other countryies? Which one? Do you want to travel to other countries? Which one?

It sounded like you wanted to ask two questions here. I have set this sentence to ask firstly if they would like to travel assuming the answer is yes then I have followed it up asking the to choose one.

And I also wanna try other exercise -s like: yoga, climbing, and surf ing. By the way, Wwhich one wherecountry do you want to travel to other country? And I also wanna try other exercises like: yoga, climbing and surfing. By the way, which country do you want to travel to?

I changed some more little mistakes! But I love the idea of this piece!

And I wanna try other exercises - yoga, climbing, and surf ing. By the way, Wwhich one whereof these countries do you want to travel to other country? And I wanna try other exercises - yoga, climbing, and surfing. By the way, which one of these countries do you want to travel to?

but whenHowever, my IG show my IG,ed me that there isare new places to see and things to do in Bail li. So, I wanna travel there again. However, my IG showed me that there are new places to see and things to do in Bali. So, I wanna travel there again.

Great! The word 'wanna' is really good for adding personality and a casual tone, but be careful if you're using it in a formal conversation. Then, you should use: "So, I would like/love to travel there again".

bBut whenmy IG show my IG, there ised me new places and things in Bail Sli, so I wannat to travel again. But my IG showed me new places and things in Bali, so I want to travel again.

'Wanna' is more like slang or an informal way of saying 'want to'. It is typically used in colloquial English, but people also use it when typing because it sounds more casual and is easier to type.

I want to taravel to a lot of countries-Spain, Portutogal, Turkey, Japan, New-z Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand . One of Cthe countries wherethat I most want to travel is Bail ofto recently is Bali, in Indonesia recently. I want to travel to a lot of countries-Spain, Portugal, Turkey, Japan, New Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand. One of the countries that I most want to travel to recently is Bali, in Indonesia.

I corrected a few spelling mistakes and tried to improve the sentence's flow in terms of grammar and structure!

I want to taravel to a lot of countries-: Spain, Portutogal, Turkey, Japan, New-z Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand . One of Countrthe cities where I most want to travel is Bail ofli, Indonesia, recently. I want to travel to a lot of countries: Spain, Portugal, Turkey, Japan, New Zealand, Indonesia and Thailand. One of the cities where I most want to travel is Bali, Indonesia, recently.

Bali is a city, not a country.