April 2, 2025
Hello my dictionary
Hello my dictionary, long time no see brow, well, I don't know how was your day, but you want know how was my day all right, let me share with you a little. March 31, 2025. As usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, why don't eat anything? Good question haha, then I went to work, I don't tell you any details of my work because, my work is not public. My wife and me had a big argument about it.
Olá meu dicionário, faz tempo que não vejo o brow, bem, não sei como foi seu dia, mas você quer saber como foi meu dia, tudo bem, deixe-me compartilhar um pouco com você. 31 de março de 2025. Como de costume, acordei cedo às 6h30 da manhã, por que não comi nada? Boa pergunta haha, então fui trabalhar, não conto detalhes do meu trabalho porque meu trabalho não é público. Minha esposa e eu tivemos uma grande discussão sobre isso.
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Hello my dictionary, long time no see brow, wit’s been a while. Well, I don't know how was your day was, but you want to know how was my day a. All right, let me share with you a little.
Hello my dictionary, it’s been a while. Well, I don't know how your day was, but you want to know how was my day. All right, let me share with you a little.
March 31, 2025.:
March 31, 2025:
As usual, I woke up early at 6:30AM in the morning, w. Why don't you eat anything?
As usual, I woke up early at 6:30AM in the morning. Why don't you eat anything?
Good question haha, t. Then I went to work,. I don't tell you any details of my work because, my work is not public.
Good question. Then I went to work. I don't tell you any details of my work because my work is not public.
My wife and meI had a big argument about it.
My wife and I had a big argument about it.
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Write informal, but correctly with full sentences.
Hello m, My dDictionary
Hello, My Dictionary
Since it's a title, we just have to capitalize the first letters :)
Hello, my dictionary, l! Long time no see, brow, w. Well, I don't know how was your day was, but you want to know how was my day all mine went? Alright, let me share with you a littlea little with you.
Hello, my dictionary! Long time no see, bro. Well, I don't know how your day was, but you want to know how mine went? Alright, let me share a little with you.
Added commas and exclamation mark for flow. Try reading this out loud so you can feel the pauses with the commas :P Oh, and I changed "brow" to "bro" which is short for "brother" or just used as slang for "friend." :D
As usual, I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, w. Why doidn't I eat anything?
As usual, I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning. Why didn't I eat anything?
I changed the verb tense to "didn't" because this is past tense :) And added an "I" because you are the subject of the sentence, but you were missing :P
Good question —haha, t! Then, I went to work,. I dwon't tellgive you any details of my work because, my work is not public.about my job because it's confidential.
Good question—haha! Then, I went to work. I won't give you any details about my job because it's confidential.
Replaced "my work is not public" with "it’s confidential" — a more accurate and formal word for something private or secret.
And just made a few small grammar changes.
Split into two sentences for clarity and flow.
My wife and meI had a big argument about ithat.
My wife and I had a big argument about that.
Corrected the grammar: "My wife and I" (subject form) instead of "me."
Check out this website about when to use "and me" or "and I" :D https://medium.com/creators-hub/a-simple-trick-for-knowing-when-to-use-and-me-or-and-i-1c7e4e49e529
Changed “about it” to “about that” to clarify and sound more natural in context.
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Overall, I'd say that you did a great job :D I saw that you mentioned how old your dictionary was, so I thought that I'd recommend reading simple children's books or short stories in English. Or even music! It may sound silly, but it really helps to build a foundation :)
There's also of course the Anki app for A1 flashcards or Quizlet, but I'd recommend even adding the "Language Reactor" browser extension to Google Chrome or whatever browser you use so that you can actively translate and gather new words while you watch Netflix or other streaming apps.
This can be a fun way to learn whilst also enjoying the shows that you love :D Oh, and there's also a game called "Noun Town" if you'd like to give that a go!
Anyway, you've done a great job! Keep up the good work :)
April 2, 2025
you feedback is so good, thanks for help me.
Hello mMy dDictionary
Hello My Dictionary
Hello my dictionary, long time no see brow, well,. I don't know how was your day was, but you wanted to know how was my day awas. All right, let me share with you a little.
Hello my dictionary, long time no see. I don't know how your day was, but you wanted to know how my day was. All right, let me share with you a little.
AsPer usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, why doidn't I eat anything?
Per usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, why didn't I eat anything?
Good question haha,. I then I went to work, I docan't tell you any details of my work because, my work is not public.
Good question haha. I then went to work, I can't tell you any details of my work because my work is not public.
My wife and meI had a big argument about it.
My wife and I had a big argument about it.
Hello m, My dDictionary
Hello, My Dictionary
After the initial greeting, such as "Hello" or "Dear Dictionary" you need a comma. In English, all but the small words such as "the," "and" and the like are capitalized in titles.
Hello, my dictionary, l. Long time no see, brow, w. Well, I don't know how was your day was, but you may want know how was my day awas. All right, let me share with you a littlea little with you.
Hello, my dictionary. Long time no see, bro. Well, I don't know how your day was, but you may want know how my day was. All right, let me share a little with you.
This is very informal and chatty, as though you are talking to a good friend. I like the tone, and using slang words and phrases like "bro" and "Long time no see" contributes to that feeling.
March 31, 2025.
As usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, w. Why doidn't I eat anything?
As usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning. Why didn't I eat anything?
When you begin a new sentence you have to put a period after the first sentence and begin the next sentence with a capital letter. Otherwise you have connect the two sentences with a comma and and conjunction, such "morning, and why"
Good question haha, then I went to work, I don't tell you any details of my work because, my work is not public.
My wife and meI had a big argument about it.
My wife and I had a big argument about it.
The previous sentence should be "Good question. Ha,ha. Then I went to work. I can't tell you any details of my work because my work is not public." I presses the wrong button in the previous, and didn't want to discard everything and start over. Sorry.
April 2, 2025
"Hello, My Dictionary.
Hello, my dictionary! Long time no see, bro. Well, I don’t know how your day was, but you probably want to know how my day went. Alright, let me share a little with you.
March 31, 2025. As usual, I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning. Why didn’t I eat anything? Good question, haha. Then, I went to work. I won’t give you any details about my work because it’s confidential. My wife and I had a big argument about it."
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Hello my dictionary
Hello After the initial greeting, such as "Hello" or "Dear Dictionary" you need a comma. In English, all but the small words such as "the," "and" and the like are capitalized in titles.
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Hello Since it's a title, we just have to capitalize the first letters :) |
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Hello my dictionary, long time no see brow, well, I don't know how was your day, but you want know how was my day all right, let me share with you a little.
Hello, my dictionary This is very informal and chatty, as though you are talking to a good friend. I like the tone, and using slang words and phrases like "bro" and "Long time no see" contributes to that feeling.
Hello my dictionary, long time no see
Hello, my dictionary Added commas and exclamation mark for flow. Try reading this out loud so you can feel the pauses with the commas :P Oh, and I changed "brow" to "bro" which is short for "brother" or just used as slang for "friend." :D
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March 31, 2025. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
March 31, 2025 |
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As usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning, why don't eat anything?
As usual I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning When you begin a new sentence you have to put a period after the first sentence and begin the next sentence with a capital letter. Otherwise you have connect the two sentences with a comma and and conjunction, such "morning, and why"
As usual, I woke up early at 6:30 in the morning I changed the verb tense to "didn't" because this is past tense :) And added an "I" because you are the subject of the sentence, but you were missing :P
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Good question haha, then I went to work, I don't tell you any details of my work because, my work is not public. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Good question haha
Good question Replaced "my work is not public" with "it’s confidential" — a more accurate and formal word for something private or secret. And just made a few small grammar changes. Split into two sentences for clarity and flow.
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My wife and me had a big argument about it.
My wife and The previous sentence should be "Good question. Ha,ha. Then I went to work. I can't tell you any details of my work because my work is not public." I presses the wrong button in the previous, and didn't want to discard everything and start over. Sorry.
My wife and
My wife and Corrected the grammar: "My wife and I" (subject form) instead of "me." Check out this website about when to use "and me" or "and I" :D https://medium.com/creators-hub/a-simple-trick-for-knowing-when-to-use-and-me-or-and-i-1c7e4e49e529 Changed “about it” to “about that” to clarify and sound more natural in context.
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