My dDaily rRoutine (1) My Daily Routine (1)

Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I fall asleep again for another 10 to 20 minutes. Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I fall asleep again for another 10 to 20 minutes.

The original is okay, but this feels better. I don't know why, sorry...

Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I sleep again fofor another 10 to 20 minutes. Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I sleep for another 10 to 20 minutes.

Using "again" would imply that you stopped entirely, then started again, but you didn't really get out of bed, so I would use the form I used.

[Then,] I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom. [Then,] I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.

Optional, but flows better

Then, I pack my bag. Then, I pack my bag.

I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it for myself. I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it for myself.

Usually I eat rice or oats for my breakfast. Usually I eat rice or oats for breakfast.

DurWhile eating breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos. While eating breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos.

I like watching videos from BBC lLearning English, Smosh Reddit rReading, or something interesting, especially about language learning. I like watching videos from BBC Learning English, Smosh Reddit Reading, or something interesting, especially about language learning.

I'm guessing these are youtube channels. For clarity it is best to use title case (capitalise every word besides minor ones such as "the" or "a").

I like watching videos from BBC to learning English, reading the Smosh Rsubreddit reading, or something else interesting, especially about language learning. I like watching videos from BBC to learn English, reading the Smosh subreddit, or something else interesting, especially about language learning.

Couldn't tell exactly what you meant to say, the other person's correction is probably correct (editing my correction because I just saw that) without including "else" it sounds like you're saying the other things you listed AREN'T interesting by contrast

I like watching videos from BBC lLearning English, Smosh Reddit reading, or something interesting, especially about language learning. I like watching videos from BBC Learning English, Smosh Reddit reading, or something interesting, especially about language learning.

After breakfast, I need to get dressed. After breakfast, I need to get dressed.

After breakfast, I need to get dressed. After breakfast, I need to get dressed.

I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work. I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at work.

Idk why, but even though we say "my job" we don't really say "my work." "work" by itself to refer to your job is fine In other contexts "my work" is fine, when you're referring to the actual work that was done, ie. "My work was displayed in an art gallery," "My work with them went well."

I put my thermos and some aprons, (they’re my workwear,) in my bag. I put my thermos and some aprons (they’re my workwear) in my bag.

I go down the stairs and leave themy apartment. I go down the stairs and leave my apartment.

While I’m going to work, While I’m going to work,