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Buki

July 13, 2025

I’m writing today’s diary entry before going to bed.
I went on a day trip to Kyoto with my mother.
I visited Mikane shrine to increase my fortune.
I ate bread, matcha Parfait, Mitarashi dumplings and so on.
It was a hot but fun day!

寝る前に今日の日記を書きます。
母と京都に日帰り旅行に行きました。
金運を上げるために御金神社に行きました。
食事はパンや抹茶パフェ、みたらし団子などを食べました。
暑い日だったけど楽しい1日でした。

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I’m writing today’s diary entry before going to bed.

I went on a day trip to Kyoto with my mother.

I visited Mikane shrine to increase my fortune.

I ate bread, matcha Parfait, Mitarashi dumplings and so on.

It was a hot but fun day!

JazzmineLee

I’m writing today’s diary entry before going to bed.

I went on a day trip to Kyoto with my mother.

I visited Mikane shrine to increase my fortune.

What is a Mikane Shrine? I am very intrigued.

I ate bread, matcha Parfait, Mitarashi dumplings and so on.

That sounds delicious!

It was a hot but fun day!

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very good writing. I would like to learn more about the shrine. and are you from japan? I am from the USA but I was born in Japan because my parents both were in the military.

Buki

July 13, 2025

Thanks for your messages.
I’m from Japan.
Sounds good!
Have you ever lived in Japan?
There are shrines not only in Kyoto but all over Japan.
I recommend you Arakirafujisengen shrine.

Buki

July 13, 2025

Sorry, I made a spelling mistake.
The correct spelling is Arakurafujisengen shrine.

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