July 10, 2025
20250710
Today is my third diary entry.
I submitted my report!!!!
But, my boss correct it immediately and I have to rewrite it.
I feel like I’m going to break down.
I’ll do my best.
今日は日記3日目です。
ついにレポートを提出しました。
でも上司がすぐに添削し、修正が必要になりました。
心が折れそうです。
最善を尽くします。
ButHowever, my boss corrected it immediately and I have to rewrite it.
Sentences usually aren't started with "but". I think using "However" looks better.
Feedback
Your doing very good with your English, you just need to remember to use past tense on some things, and study grammar more often. Also, I'm sorry about what happened at work! Keep doing your best, I hope things get better for you! 頑張れブキさん！
Today is my third diary entry.
I submitted my report!!!!
But, my boss correctreviewed it immediately and now I have to rewrite it.
I feel like I’m going to break down.
I’ll do my best.
Feedback
Oh no! But since you already have a rough draft now, hopefully it will be easier!
July 11, 2025
I appreciate your feedback. I’ll keep trying to improve.
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I submitted my report!!!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, my boss correct it immediately and I have to rewrite it. But, my boss
Sentences usually aren't started with "but". I think using "However" looks better. |
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I feel like I’m going to break down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’ll do my best. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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