July 9, 2025
20250708
Today is second diary.
I have to submit a thesis for my training, so I worked overtime.
After work, I went to the supermarket and cooked for myself.
I had watermelon. They’re good.
I hope tomorrow will be a good day!
今日の日記は2日目です。
研修で論文を提出しなくてはならなくて、残業しました。仕事終わりにスーパーに行き、自炊もしました。スイカも食べたよ🍉。おいしかった。
明日ははいい日になるといいな。
Today is my second diary. entry.¶
It's your diary so, a possessive noun should be attached "My".. Entry should also be attached because you're writing to tell us how your day went.
I haveneed to submit a thesis for my training, so I worked overtime.raining report, so I stayed late at work.¶
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Instead of 'thesis' use report for a layman to understand.
After work, I went to the supermarket and cooked.¶
When I got home, I cooked dinner for myself.
U didn't tell us where you cooked dinner...I presume you cooked it at home
I hadalso ate some watermelon.¶
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Using the verb ate helps to describe the action
They’re good.It was sweet and refreshing!
Describing the fruit taste is good because it well explains how you felt after eating it.
I hope tomorrow will be a good day!
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A great try...here is a better version. If you need any assistance let me know because I help people to rewrite full texts (essays, social media posts, emails), I offer fast and simple corrections.
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July 10, 2025
I really appreciate your feedback.I’ll keep trying to improve.
Today is my second diary entry.
I have to submit a thesis for my training, so I worked overtime.
After work, I went to the supermarket and then cooked for myself.
I also had watermelon.
They’re good.
I hope tomorrow will be a good day!
Feedback
Your sentences are grammatically fine but I added some corrections based on your Japanese translation. :)
July 10, 2025
Thanks a lot for the correction.
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I have to submit a thesis for my training, so I worked overtime. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I Instead of 'thesis' use report for a layman to understand. |
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After work, I went to the supermarket and cooked for myself. After work, I went to the supermarket and then cooked for myself. After work, I went to the supermarket U didn't tell us where you cooked dinner...I presume you cooked it at home |
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I had watermelon. I also had watermelon. I Using the verb ate helps to describe the action |
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They’re good. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Describing the fruit taste is good because it well explains how you felt after eating it. |
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I hope tomorrow will be a good day! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Today is second diary. Today is my second diary entry. Today is my second diary It's your diary so, a possessive noun should be attached "My".. Entry should also be attached because you're writing to tell us how your day went. |
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