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Today is my first dairy.
I wanna continue to write dairy in English everyday.
It’s very hot today. I wanted to eat something spicy. I ate tom yum kung instant noodles. It’s very good!
I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll try my best tomorrow too. I hope tomorrow will be a good day.


今日が初めての日記です。
毎日の日記を英語で書き続けていきたいです。
今日はとても暑かった。何か辛いものが食べたいなと思ってたの。だから即席麺のトムヤムクンを食べたよ。とってもおいしかった。
最近仕事が忙しいけど、明日も頑張ろう。明日はいい日になると良いな。

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I wanna continue to write daia diary in English everyday.

"dairy" - milk, cheese, butter, etc.
"diary" - a book or equivalent where you write about your day

It’sThey're very good!

Matching the plural on "noodles"

I think

"It was very good" could also work if you're describing your time eating them, as the time is singular, but then it would need to a be in the past tense as you're talking about a specific time.

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Buki

July 9, 2025

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I really appreciate your feedback. It helps a lot!

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Today is my first daiary entry.

or "Today is my first journal entry."

I wanna continue to write dairy ian English diary entry everyday.

It’s very hot today.

I wanted to eat something spicy.

I ate tom yum kung instant noodles.

It’s very good!

I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll continue to try my best tomorrow too.

I hope tomorrow will be a good day.

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Buki

July 9, 2025

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Thanks a lot for the correction! I’ll keep trying to improve.

Today is my first daiary entry.

Diary is what you write in, and a synonym for journal. Dairy is a different word which defines the group of food/drink that involve milk (milk, butter, cream, yogurt, cheese, etc.)
Your diary/journal is what you write in, but each time you write in it, it is your journal entry.

I wannat to continue to write dairyjournal in English every day.

"Wanna" is slang for "want to," but is not grammatically correct English.
Journal can also be used as a verb (to journal is to write in a journal) and fits most naturally here. If you did want to choose the word diary, you could say: I want to continue writing in a diary in English every day.
"Every day" means each day. "Everyday" is used as an adjective in a different sense, to be used for items that are both casually and often used, "These are my everyday slippers."

It’s very hot today.

I wanted to eat something spicy.

I ate tom yum kung instant noodles.

It’s very good!

I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll try my best tomorrow to journal too.

It's good to repeat what you are referring to here since there was a small detour on other subjects.

I hope tomorrow will be a good day.

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Good job!

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Buki

July 9, 2025

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Thanks for helping me improve!

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Today is my first dairy.


Today is my first daiary entry.

Diary is what you write in, and a synonym for journal. Dairy is a different word which defines the group of food/drink that involve milk (milk, butter, cream, yogurt, cheese, etc.) Your diary/journal is what you write in, but each time you write in it, it is your journal entry.

Today is my first daiary entry.

or "Today is my first journal entry."

I wanna continue to write dairy in English everyday.


I wannat to continue to write dairyjournal in English every day.

"Wanna" is slang for "want to," but is not grammatically correct English. Journal can also be used as a verb (to journal is to write in a journal) and fits most naturally here. If you did want to choose the word diary, you could say: I want to continue writing in a diary in English every day. "Every day" means each day. "Everyday" is used as an adjective in a different sense, to be used for items that are both casually and often used, "These are my everyday slippers."

I wanna continue to write dairy ian English diary entry everyday.

I wanna continue to write daia diary in English everyday.

"dairy" - milk, cheese, butter, etc. "diary" - a book or equivalent where you write about your day

It’s very hot today.


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I wanted to eat something spicy.


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I ate tom yum kung instant noodles.


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It’s very good!


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It’sThey're very good!

Matching the plural on "noodles" I think "It was very good" could also work if you're describing your time eating them, as the time is singular, but then it would need to a be in the past tense as you're talking about a specific time.

I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll try my best tomorrow too.


I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll try my best tomorrow to journal too.

It's good to repeat what you are referring to here since there was a small detour on other subjects.

I’ve been busy with work lately, but I’ll continue to try my best tomorrow too.

I hope tomorrow will be a good day.


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