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2025年12月3号

‎我们今天写了三个测验。本应该有两个测验,但一位老师突然说我们会做测验。我心里都已经怀疑我们今天可能会写她的测验。谁知道我会猜对了?今天4点半本来有课,但被取消了。所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。

‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下。如果只是读书,我会很快读腻了。

‎今天是我第一次见到牡丹。我没有想到牡丹多好看。我现在想看到真花。


We had three quizzes today. There were only supposed to be two, but one teacher suddenly announced we would have a quiz. I already suspected in my heart that we might have her quiz today. Who knew I would guess correctly? My class that was supposed to be at 4:30 PM was canceled, so I got back to my hostel very early today.

​While reading and listening to a novel on WeChat Reading today, I found that I might be able to try this combination. If I only read, I would quickly get tired of it.

​Today is the first time I'm seeing the peony. I never knew the peony is this beautiful. Now I really want to see the real flower."

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在这之前我心里都已经怀疑我们今天可能会写她的测验。

所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。

‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下。

没太明白 “可以了解一下”的具体意思

我没有想到牡丹这么好看。

我现在想看到真花。

‎我们今天完成了三个测验。

本应该两个测验,但一位老师突然说我们会做测验。

心里都已经怀疑预感到我们今天可能会她的测验。

谁知道猜对了?

今天4点半本来有课,但被取消了。

所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。

‎今天在微信读书我试着一边读一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下尝试一下这个听读的组合

如果只是读书,我会很快读腻了。

‎今天是我第一次见到牡丹。

我没有想到牡丹原来这么好看。

我现在想看到真花。

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‎我们今天写了三个测验。

本应该有两个测验,但一位老师突然说我们会做测验。

我心里都已经怀疑我们今天可能会写她的测验。

谁知道我会猜对了?

今天4点半本来有课,但被取消了。

所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。

‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下我可以尝试这种组合

如果只是读书,我会很快读腻了。

‎今天是我第一次见到牡丹。

我没有想到牡丹这么好看。

我现在想看到真花。



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2025年12月3号


‎我们今天写了三个测验。


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‎我们今天完成了三个测验。

本应该有两个测验,但一位老师突然说我们会做测验。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

本应该两个测验,但一位老师突然说我们会做测验。

我心里都已经怀疑我们今天可能会写她的测验。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

心里都已经怀疑预感到我们今天可能会她的测验。

在这之前我心里都已经怀疑我们今天可能会写她的测验。

谁知道我会猜对了?


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谁知道猜对了?

今天4点半本来有课,但被取消了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

所以我今天很早回到宿舍了。

‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下。


‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下我可以尝试这种组合

‎今天在微信读书我试着一边读一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下尝试一下这个听读的组合

‎今天在微信读书一边读书一边听小说的时候,我发现好像可以了解一下。

没太明白 “可以了解一下”的具体意思

如果只是读书,我会很快读腻了。


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!


‎今天是我第一次见到牡丹。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我没有想到牡丹多好看。


我没有想到牡丹这么好看。

我没有想到牡丹原来这么好看。

我没有想到牡丹这么好看。

我现在想看到真花。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我现在想看到真花。

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