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Dec. 18, 2024

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2024年11月13日

2024年11月12日(星期二)
我是英语老师。今天工作了半日。晚上只有我的中学生来了学英语。早上我换了我车的轮胎。我女儿去皮科医生过了。她就长痘痘了。

我学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。今天她打电话我,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。我说了当然。我很想成为圣诞老人。在中国有没有圣诞节?和圣诞老人?

2024年11月13日(星期三)
今天也工作半日。早上我换了大提琴弦。然后我一个小时拉大提琴了。


November 12, 2024 (Tuesday)
I am an English teacher. I worked half a day today. Only my middle school students came to learn English in the evening. I changed the tires of my car in the morning. My daughter went to the dermatologist. She has acne.

My student's mother is a kindergarten teacher. She called me today. She wants me to play Santa Claus at the kindergarten Christmas party. I said of course. I like being Santa Claus. Is there Christmas in China? And Santa Claus?

November 13, 2024 (Wednesday)
I also worked half a day today. I changed my cello strings in the morning. Then I played cello for an hour.

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2024年11月13日

2024年11月12日(星期二) 我是英语老师。

今天工作了半日。

晚上只有我的中学生来学英语。

早上我换了的轮胎。

我女儿去看皮肤科医生了。

长痘痘了。



有个学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。

今天她打电话我,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮圣诞老人。

说了当然答应了

我很想成为圣诞老人。

在中国有没有过不过圣诞节?

有人扮圣诞老人

2024年11月13日(星期三) 今天也工作半日。

早上我换了大提琴弦。

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

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寫得很好!

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谢谢!

2024年11月13日

2024年11月12日(星期二) 我是英语老师。

今天工作了半

晚上只有我中学生来了学的学生来学了英语。

November 12, 2024 (Tuesday)
I am an English teacher. I worked half a day today. Only my middle school students came to learn English in the evening. I changed the tires of my car in the morning. My daughter went to the dermatologist. She has acne.

My student's mother is a kindergarten teacher. She called me today. She wants me to play Santa Claus at the kindergarten Christmas party. I said of course. I like being Santa Claus. Is there Christmas in China? And Santa Claus?

November 13, 2024 (Wednesday)
I also worked half a day today. I changed my cello strings in the morning. Then I played cello for an hour.

早上我换了我车的给我的车换了轮胎。

我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

长痘痘了。

我学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。

今天她电话我,想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。

我说当然

我很想成为圣诞老人。

在中国有没有圣诞节?

和圣诞老人?

2024年11月13日(星期三) 今天也工作半日。

早上我换了大提琴弦。

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

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中国有圣诞节和圣诞老人,不过大部分是商场里的活动。

还有教堂和圣诞集市,也很热闹。

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Japanada

Dec. 19, 2024

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谢谢!

今天工作了半

晚上只有我初中学生来学英语。

我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

长痘痘了。

我说当然。

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴了。

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看得懂。

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Japanada

Dec. 19, 2024

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谢谢!

2024年11月13日

2024年11月12日(星期二) 我是英语老师。

今天工作了半

晚上只有我的中学生来英语。

我的中学生 sounds a bit like my own middle school aged child.

早上我换了我车的轮胎。

The current sentence is grammatically correct. 我给我的车换了轮胎 is a bit better.

我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

皮肤科 not 皮科

就长痘痘了。

“就”makes it sound like the dermatologist is causing the acne.

我学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。

今天她给我打电话,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。

我说当然可以

我很想成为扮演圣诞老人。

成为 implies that you want to actually become Santa for real.

中国有没有圣诞节?

和圣诞老人?



2024年11月13日(星期三)

今天也工作半

早上我换了大提琴弦。

It is technically correct, but“给大提琴换了弦”is better.

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

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Japanada

Dec. 19, 2024

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谢谢!

2024年11月12日(星期二) 我是英语老师。


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我很想成为圣诞老人。


我很想成为扮演圣诞老人。

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我很想成为圣诞老人。

在中国有没有圣诞节?


中国有没有圣诞节?

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有人扮圣诞老人

2024年11月13日(星期三) 今天也工作半日。




2024年11月13日(星期三)

今天也工作半

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早上我换了大提琴弦。

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然后我一个小时拉大提琴了。


然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴了。

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

然后我拉了一个小时大提琴

晚上只有我的中学生来了学英语。


晚上只有我的中学生来英语。

我的中学生 sounds a bit like my own middle school aged child.

晚上只有我初中学生来学英语。

晚上只有我中学生来了学的学生来学了英语。

November 12, 2024 (Tuesday) I am an English teacher. I worked half a day today. Only my middle school students came to learn English in the evening. I changed the tires of my car in the morning. My daughter went to the dermatologist. She has acne. My student's mother is a kindergarten teacher. She called me today. She wants me to play Santa Claus at the kindergarten Christmas party. I said of course. I like being Santa Claus. Is there Christmas in China? And Santa Claus? November 13, 2024 (Wednesday) I also worked half a day today. I changed my cello strings in the morning. Then I played cello for an hour.

晚上只有我的中学生来学英语。

早上我换了我车的轮胎。


早上我换了我车的轮胎。

The current sentence is grammatically correct. 我给我的车换了轮胎 is a bit better.

早上我换了我车的给我的车换了轮胎。

早上我换了的轮胎。

我女儿去皮科医生过了。


我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

皮肤科 not 皮科

我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

我女儿去看了皮肤科医生过了

我女儿去看皮肤科医生了。

她就长痘痘了。


就长痘痘了。

“就”makes it sound like the dermatologist is causing the acne.

长痘痘了。

长痘痘了。

长痘痘了。

我学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。


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有个学生的妈妈是幼儿园老师。

今天她打电话我,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。


今天她给我打电话,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。

今天她电话我,想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮演圣诞老人。

今天她打电话我,她想让我在幼儿园圣诞晚会上扮圣诞老人。

我说了当然。


我说当然可以

我说当然。

我说当然

说了当然答应了

2024年11月13日


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