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Japanada

Nov. 20, 2024

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2024年10月22日(星期二)

2024年10月22日(星期二)
我儿子和他的同学们(十三岁了)去了火车站。工作人员向孩子们演示如何驾驶火车。这很有趣,不是吗?我一直想开火车。

2024年10月23日(星期三)
今天我儿子和他的同学去医院了。护士给他们演示了如何抽血。真的吗?嗯,是的…….但是她用了人体模型。


October 22, 2024 (Tuesday)
My son and his classmates (13 years old) went to the train station. The staff showed the kids how to drive a train. It was fun, eh? I've always wanted to drive a train.

October 23, 2024 (Wednesday)
Today my son and his classmates went to the hospital. The nurse showed them how to draw blood. Really? Well, yes....but she used a mannequin

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2024年10月22日(星期二)

2024年10月22日(星期二) 我儿子和他的同学们(十三岁了)去了火车站。

工作人员向孩子们演示如何驾驶火车。

这很有趣,不是吗?

我一直想开火车。

2024年10月23日(星期三) 今天我儿子和他的同学去医院了。

护士给他们演示了如何抽血。

真的吗?

嗯,是的…….但是她用了人体模型。

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寫得很好!

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Japanada

Nov. 25, 2024

9

谢谢!

2024年10月22日(星期二)

2024年10月22日(星期二) 我儿子和他的同学们(十三岁了)去了火车站。

工作人员向孩子们演示如何驾驶火车。

这很有趣,不是吗?

我一直想开火车。

2024年10月23日(星期三) 今天我儿子和他的同学去医院了。

护士给他们演示了如何抽血。

真的吗?

嗯,是的…….但是她用的是人体模型。

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Japanada

Nov. 21, 2024

9

谢谢!

2024年10月22日(星期二)


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2024年10月22日(星期二) 我儿子和他的同学们(十三岁了)去了火车站。


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工作人员向孩子们演示如何驾驶火车。


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这很有趣,不是吗?


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我一直想开火车。


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2024年10月23日(星期三) 今天我儿子和他的同学去医院了。


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护士给他们演示了如何抽血。


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真的吗?


真的吗?

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嗯,是的…….但是她用了人体模型。


嗯,是的…….但是她用的是人体模型。

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