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djambeeg

July 13, 2023

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2023/07/12 #5 廣東話日記

今日我返咗五個鐘工。因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐,今日我身體好痛。夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅,另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅。最後係華盛頓嗰隊贏咗

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2023/07/12 #5 廣東話日記

今日我返咗五個鐘工。

因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐,今日我身體好痛。

夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。

一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅,另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅

you're not wrong, but it sounds a bit "pretentious" if you add 嚟嘅 at the end, sounds less natural to locals.

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djambeeg

July 13, 2023

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2023/07/12 #5 廣東話日記


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今日我返咗五個鐘工。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐,今日我身體好痛。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。


夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。

一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅,另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅。


一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅,另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅

you're not wrong, but it sounds a bit "pretentious" if you add 嚟嘅 at the end, sounds less natural to locals.

最後係華盛頓嗰隊贏咗


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