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kidneyprivilege

April 8, 2022

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2022/04/07

有一段時間,我很喜歡在旅遊時拍照。我沒有用社交媒體,所以拍照純粹是為了記錄自己做了什麼。其實拍照也很講究技巧,除了看光線,還要考慮構圖。我逐漸發現每次到達新的景點時,我只顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實。所以後來,我沒有那麼注重作紀念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍照。

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2022/04/07

有一段時間,我很喜歡在旅遊時拍照。

我沒有用社交媒體,所以拍照純粹是為了記錄自己做了什麼。

其實拍照也很講究技巧,除了看光線,還要考慮構圖。

漸發現當我每次到達新的景點時,顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實,(根本沒有好好享受那一刻。)

所以後來,我沒有那麼注重以拍照作紀念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍照。

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Before, when I dined outside, I took pictures for every meal, I did not post them all to my social media, but later I figured out that those pictures that I took have actually not much use so I just take some when the dish is really pretty haha

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kidneyprivilege

April 9, 2022

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Thank you! I feel like food is one of the hardest things to take pictures of, lots of dishes taste good but don't photograph well lol.

有一段時間,我很喜歡在旅遊時拍照。

我沒有用社交媒體,所以拍照純粹是為了記錄自己做了什麼。

其實拍照也很講究技巧,除了看光線,還要考慮構圖。

我逐漸發現每次到達新的景點時,我(都)只顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實。

所以後來,我沒有那麼注重作紀拍照留念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍

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Very nice writing, very authentic

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kidneyprivilege

April 9, 2022

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Thank you for the corrections!

2022/04/07


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我沒有用社交媒體,所以拍照純粹是為了記錄自己做了什麼。


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其實拍照也很講究技巧,除了看光線,還要考慮構圖。


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我逐漸發現每次到達新的景點時,我只顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實。


我逐漸發現每次到達新的景點時,我(都)只顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實。

漸發現當我每次到達新的景點時,顧著拍照,如果圖不好看就感到不踏實,(根本沒有好好享受那一刻。)

所以後來,我沒有那麼注重作紀念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍照。


所以後來,我沒有那麼注重作紀拍照留念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍

所以後來,我沒有那麼注重以拍照作紀念,看到自己很喜歡的東西才拍照。

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