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kidneyprivilege

April 1, 2022

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2022/03/31

我經常去一條位於海邊的人行道散步。當天氣好時,很多人會在那裏釣魚。一直以來,我對釣魚這個的興趣感到渺茫,因為它看起來非常無聊。雖然我喜歡自己一個人呆著,但我通常會用那些時間來看書或者聽音樂。對我來說,坐著等事發生感覺很痛苦。

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2022/03/31

我經常去一條位於海邊的人行道散步。

Alt: 一條在海邊的人行道散步

當天氣好時,很多人會在那裏釣魚。

Alt: 那裡 (This word is more common.)

一直以來,我對釣魚這個興趣感到渺茫很納悶,因為它看起來非常無聊。

雖然我喜歡自己一個人呆著/獨處,但我通常會用那些時間來看書或者聽音樂。

Alt: 我喜歡獨處

對我來說,坐著事發生感覺很痛苦。

乾等 means to sit around and wait in vain. It is subjective. People who enjoy fishing probably don't think they wait in vain. :)

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Sunny2022

April 1, 2022

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Nice job!

I don't understand why go fishing is interesting, either. But I've heard some fishing enthusiasts says it is interesting because you need to use strategies to catch fish. Does it make sense? :D

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Sunny2022

April 1, 2022

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Nice job!

I don't understand why going fishing is interesting, either. But I've heard some fishing enthusiasts says it is interesting because you need to use strategies to catch fish. Does it make sense? :D

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kidneyprivilege

April 2, 2022

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Thank you! And yes, I think I get what's you're trying to say. Maybe I'll appreciate fishing more when I'm older 😂

2022/03/31


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我經常去一條位於海邊的人行道散步。


我經常去一條位於海邊的人行道散步。

Alt: 一條在海邊的人行道散步

當天氣好時,很多人會在那裏釣魚。


當天氣好時,很多人會在那裏釣魚。

Alt: 那裡 (This word is more common.)

一直以來,我對釣魚這個的興趣感到渺茫,因為它看起來非常無聊。


一直以來,我對釣魚這個興趣感到渺茫很納悶,因為它看起來非常無聊。

雖然我喜歡自己一個人呆著,但我通常會用那些時間來看書或者聽音樂。


雖然我喜歡自己一個人呆著/獨處,但我通常會用那些時間來看書或者聽音樂。

Alt: 我喜歡獨處

對我來說,坐著等事發生感覺很痛苦。


對我來說,坐著事發生感覺很痛苦。

乾等 means to sit around and wait in vain. It is subjective. People who enjoy fishing probably don't think they wait in vain. :)

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