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2022 Chinese New Year Tiger

2022 Chinese New Year Tiger

Year of Tiger!

We should strong as Tiger and crash the virus.

Now is not the time asking what is your New Year wishes or dream?

Now is the time asking what you can do to change!

Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.

I am old but I would never stop to learning.

After I learned, I will share and I also make mistakes too.

No one is perfect and No one will perfect.

Better then yesterday is the goal.

At the end, make me remember who you are in our journey of life.

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The Year of the Tiger!

We should be as strong as a Tiger and craush the virus.

crash = hit and destroy, for example, the car crashed into the wall
crush = to defeat, for example, they crushed the other team with a score of 83 to 15

Now is not the time to asking what is your New Year's wishes or dream?.

Now is the time to asking what you can do to change!

Don't worry or do non't think your contribution is small.

I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

stop + ing = you don't learn any more
stop to learn = stop doing something in order to study

Another example:
He stopped smoking = he doesn't smoke any more.
He stopped to smoke = He stopped (working in order) to smoke

After I learned something, I will share it and I also make mistakes too.

No one is perfect and Nno one will ever be perfect.

Better then yesterday is the goalImprovement is the goal" be better that you were yesterday.

AtIn the end, makelet me remember who you are in our journey of life.

at the end = at the end of the story, at the end of the street, at the end of the day
in the end = a conclusion (we had trouble writing that program, but in the end it turned out well)

2022 Chinese New Year: Tiger

You can also say "2022 Chinese New Year, Year of the Tiger"

Year of the Tiger!

We should be strong aslike the Tiger and craush the virus.

"crush" in this sentence means "destroy, kill, defeat"

You can say "like the Tiger" (the famous Tiger of the zodiac), or "strong like a tiger" (any tiger, the animal itself), both are okay!

Now is not the time for asking w"What isare your New Year wishes or dream?s?"

Now is the time for asking what you can do to change!

Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.

Do you mean "Do not worry"? :)

I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

After I learned, I will share, and I also make mistakes too.

No one is perfect and Nno one will be perfect.

You can also say "No one is perfect and no one will ever be perfect." In my opinion it sounds better :)

BTo be better thean yesterday is the goal.

I think this sounds better, but your original sentence is okay.

You can also say "Being better than yesterday" or even "Becoming better than yesterday"

Feedback

Nice work!

Year of Tiger!

Year of the Tiger!

We should be as strong as Tthe tiger and crash the virus.

Now is not the time to asking what iswhat your Nnew Yyear wishes or dream?s are;

Now is the time to asking what you can do to change!

Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.

I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

After I have learned, I will share and. I also make mistakes too.

No one is perfect and Nno one will be perfect.

BThe goal is to be better thean yesterday is the goal.

Switching the order sounds more natural.

Feedback

Great job! Your spelling was perfect. Work on grammar. Keep working hard.

2022 Chinese New Year Tiger


2022 Chinese New Year: Tiger

You can also say "2022 Chinese New Year, Year of the Tiger"

2022 Chinese New Year Tiger


Year of Tiger!


Year of Tiger!

Year of the Tiger!

Year of the Tiger!

The Year of the Tiger!

We should strong as Tiger and crash the virus.


We should be as strong as Tthe tiger and crash the virus.

We should be strong aslike the Tiger and craush the virus.

"crush" in this sentence means "destroy, kill, defeat" You can say "like the Tiger" (the famous Tiger of the zodiac), or "strong like a tiger" (any tiger, the animal itself), both are okay!

We should be as strong as a Tiger and craush the virus.

crash = hit and destroy, for example, the car crashed into the wall crush = to defeat, for example, they crushed the other team with a score of 83 to 15

Now is not the time asking what is your New Year wishes or dream?


Now is not the time to asking what iswhat your Nnew Yyear wishes or dream?s are;

Now is not the time for asking w"What isare your New Year wishes or dream?s?"

Now is not the time to asking what is your New Year's wishes or dream?.

Now is the time asking what you can do to change!


Now is the time to asking what you can do to change!

Now is the time for asking what you can do to change!

Now is the time to asking what you can do to change!

Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.


Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.

Do worry or do not think your contribution is small.

Do you mean "Do not worry"? :)

Don't worry or do non't think your contribution is small.

I am old but I would never stop to learning.


I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

I am old but I wouldill never stop to learning.

stop + ing = you don't learn any more stop to learn = stop doing something in order to study Another example: He stopped smoking = he doesn't smoke any more. He stopped to smoke = He stopped (working in order) to smoke

After I learned, I will share and I also make mistakes too.


After I have learned, I will share and. I also make mistakes too.

After I learned, I will share, and I also make mistakes too.

After I learned something, I will share it and I also make mistakes too.

No one is perfect and No one will perfect.


No one is perfect and Nno one will be perfect.

No one is perfect and Nno one will be perfect.

You can also say "No one is perfect and no one will ever be perfect." In my opinion it sounds better :)

No one is perfect and Nno one will ever be perfect.

Better then yesterday is the goal.


BThe goal is to be better thean yesterday is the goal.

Switching the order sounds more natural.

BTo be better thean yesterday is the goal.

I think this sounds better, but your original sentence is okay. You can also say "Being better than yesterday" or even "Becoming better than yesterday"

Better then yesterday is the goalImprovement is the goal" be better that you were yesterday.

At the end, make me remember who you are in our journey of life.


AtIn the end, makelet me remember who you are in our journey of life.

at the end = at the end of the story, at the end of the street, at the end of the day in the end = a conclusion (we had trouble writing that program, but in the end it turned out well)

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