Dec. 30, 2021
2021/12/30
最令我印象深刻的生日是我六歲生日。其實那天並不是我正式生日，而是我的生日派對而已。當年我生日在週日，所以父母打算預前在週末慶祝。在派對的那一天，我首先會去學校參加課外活動，然後下午去派對慶祝。那天我非常興奮，穿了校服和襪子後在客廳跑來跑去，結果摔倒了，而且還把大門牙碰掉。當時，我哭了好久，因為這樣把牙齒碰掉非常痛，而且還流了很多血。事後，父母帶了我去看牙醫，確保牙齒沒有問題。最終，我在生日派對玩得很開心，不過我的大門牙兩年後才長了回來。
2021/12/30
最令我印象深刻的生日是我六歲生日。
其實那天並不是我正式生日，而是我的生日派對而已。
當年我生日在週日，所以不過父母打算預前在提前一個週末慶祝。
Do you mean celebrating at Saturday or the weekend in advance ?
在派對的那一天，我首先會去學校參加課外活動，然後下午去派對慶祝。
那天我非常興奮，穿了校服和襪子後在客廳跑來跑去，結果摔倒了，而且還把大門牙碰掉。
當時，我哭了好久，因為這樣把牙齒碰掉非常痛，而且還流了很多血。
事後，父母帶了我去看牙醫，確保牙齒沒有什麼大問題。
Coz you said the tooth “grown back” after so I guess at that time the original tooth was out of the socket (ie avulsion) . In this case, it is not the tooth that had no problem but it is just that the whole thing was not a big deal.
最終，後我在生日派對玩得很開心，不過我的大門牙兩年後才長了回來／不過因為這次意外，本來應該在六歲長出來的大門牙在兩年後才長出來。
I think you are talking abt the permanent tooth that grows “back” but in fact, the permanent upper incisors should be erupted at around 7-8, and what you have lost is the primary incisor, so I think maybe becoz of the accident the eruption is delayed. I hope I am correct
Jan. 2, 2022
最終，後我在生日派對玩得很開心，不過我的大門牙兩年後才長了回來／不過因為這次意外，本來應該在六歲長出來的大門牙在兩年後才長出來。
Yes this is probably it! At the time, my parents told me it was because my baby teeth weren't ready to fall out so it took so long for my adult teeth to grow in its place.
Thank you for the corrections!
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最令我印象深刻的生日是我六歲生日。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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其實那天並不是我正式生日，而是我的生日派對而已。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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當年我生日在週日，所以父母打算預前在週末慶祝。 當年我生日在週日， Do you mean celebrating at Saturday or the weekend in advance ? |
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在派對的那一天，我首先會去學校參加課外活動，然後下午去派對慶祝。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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那天我非常興奮，穿了校服和襪子後在客廳跑來跑去，結果摔倒了，而且還把大門牙碰掉。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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當時，我哭了好久，因為這樣把牙齒碰掉非常痛，而且還流了很多血。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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事後，父母帶了我去看牙醫，確保牙齒沒有問題。 事後 Coz you said the tooth “grown back” after so I guess at that time the original tooth was out of the socket (ie avulsion) . In this case, it is not the tooth that had no problem but it is just that the whole thing was not a big deal. |
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最終，我在生日派對玩得很開心，不過我的大門牙兩年後才長了回來。 最 I think you are talking abt the permanent tooth that grows “back” but in fact, the permanent upper incisors should be erupted at around 7-8, and what you have lost is the primary incisor, so I think maybe becoz of the accident the eruption is delayed. I hope I am correct |
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