Nov. 3, 2021
2021/11/02
我比較喜歡用便宜的速寫本來畫畫。因為品質好的素描本不僅是貴的，而且給自己的壓力也很大。每次下筆時，我都擔心自己會畫錯而浪費紙，所以很難下手。反而，在便宜的速寫本裏畫時，我不會太在乎結果，所以能夠盡情畫。
我比較喜歡用便宜的速寫本來畫畫。
因為品質好的素描本不僅是貴的，而且給自己的壓力也很大。
所以每次下筆時，我都會擔心自己會畫錯而浪費紙，所以因此很難下手。
反而，在便宜的速寫本裏裡畫時，我不會太在乎結果，所以能夠盡情的畫。
to write as 反而，用便宜的速寫本畫畫時，我.....的畫 is more natural !
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you can ask me anything about art! I used to draw before. anything about from watercolor to pencil I've almost draw, included the study of texture of paper : )
I am glad to find out a person likes to draw here!
(很開心在這裡能找到一樣對畫畫有興趣的人耶!)
Nov. 5, 2021
Thank you! And yes I feel the same, happy to find someone here that likes art as well 😁
What's your favorite medium to draw with?
你最喜歡用甚麼來畫畫？
我比較喜歡用便宜的速寫本來畫畫。
因為品質好的素描本不僅是貴的，而且挺貴的，所以會給自己很大的壓力也很大。
I think it is more logical to write like this, coz it is not two separate reasons but is 因果關係.
每次下筆時，我都擔心自己會畫錯而浪費紙，所以很難下手。
反而，在便宜的速寫本裏畫時，我不會太在乎結果，所以能夠盡情畫。
Nov. 4, 2021
Thank you! It does make more sense to phrase it that way.
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