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alexwong2164

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(2021/09/04) Next Year I am 55

30 years ago, when I finished my student life.

I start working.

At that time 55 is a long future, now is just one year later.

At that time, I would think a 55 years old man will be very old.

In fact, I am old. (fat and a lot of white hair)

But now I feel so strong even stronger than when I was 25.

Actually, not just a “feeling” I am training hard nowadays.

I exercise each day!

I become more confidence now that is a surprise.

So, don’t use age as an excuse not to exercise.

I see you in the gym!

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(2021/09/04) Next Year I am 55

30 years ago, when I finished my student life, I started working.

I start working.

I started working.

At that time 55 iwas a long futureways away, now it is just one year latermore.

At that time, I would thinkhave thought that a 55 years old man will beis very old.

(In fact, I am old (and fat and with a lot of white hair).

But now I feel so strong; even stronger than when I was 25.

Actually, it's not just a “feeling.” I am training hard nowadays.

I've become more confidencet now that, which is a surprise.

I'll see you in the gym!

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我为你很开心!写得不错!

I see you in the gym!


I'll see you in the gym!

(2021/09/04) Next Year I am 55


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30 years ago, when I finished my student life.


30 years ago, when I finished my student life, I started working.

I start working.


I start working.

I started working.

At that time 55 is a long future, now is just one year later.


At that time 55 iwas a long futureways away, now it is just one year latermore.

At that time, I would think a 55 years old man will be very old.


At that time, I would thinkhave thought that a 55 years old man will beis very old.

In fact, I am old.


(fat and a lot of white hair)


(In fact, I am old (and fat and with a lot of white hair).

But now I feel so strong even stronger than when I was 25.


But now I feel so strong; even stronger than when I was 25.

Actually, not just a “feeling” I am training hard nowadays.


Actually, it's not just a “feeling.” I am training hard nowadays.

I exercise each day!


I become more confidence now that is a surprise.


I've become more confidencet now that, which is a surprise.

So, don’t use age as an excuse not to exercise.


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