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kidneyprivilege

July 9, 2021

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2021/07/08

將來有空時,我想去維也納一遊。我是在幾年前在網上看到文章後,對這個城市開始感到興趣。當時我還是大學生,沒有很多錢,不能想去就去。雖然我沒有錢,但還能上網查資料。除了在網上找見聞,還從圖書館裏借了幾本旅遊指南來看。我覺得維也納這個城市挺適合我。它是一個藝術都市,有幾位我喜歡的畫家都是來自哪裏。對於超愛逛博物館的我來說,真是願望成真啊!除了藝術,維也納的咖啡館也很有名,做的糕點挺出色。有一種蛋糕,叫薩赫蛋糕,裏面有果醬與幾層巧克力,聽說非常好吃。我本來想在去年十二月時去維也納的,可是疫情爆發後,甚麼地方也去不了。希望一兩年後,世界各地情況會有改善,我終於可以去哪逛一逛。


In the future, I would like to visit Vienna. I first became interested in Vienna when I saw an article about the city several years ago. Back then, I was still a student and didn't have a lot of money. I couldn't travel whenever I wanted to, so I looked for information on the internet instead. Other than researching online, I also borrowed travel guides from the local library. I think Vienna will suit me very well. It is an artistic city and any artists I admire are from Vienna. For someone who loves going to museums, it would be a dream come true! Other than art, Vienna is also famous for its coffeehouses. They're well know for their pastries, especially Sachertorte, which is a cake made with apricot jam and chocolate. It's supposed to taste really good. I was supposed to visit Vienna last year in the winter. After the pandemic started, it was impossible to go anywhere. Hopefully, things will get better in a year or two so I can finally visit the city I've dreamt about for so long.

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2021/07/08

將來有空時,我想去維也納一遊。

我是在幾年前在網上看到文章後,對這個城市開始感到興趣。

當時我還是大學生,沒有很多錢,不能想去就去。

雖然我沒有錢,但還能上網查資料。

除了在網上找見聞,還從圖書館裏借了幾本旅遊指南來看。

我覺得維也納這個城市挺適合我。

它是一個藝術都市,有幾位我喜歡的畫家都是來自裏。

對於超愛逛博物館的我來說,真是願望(夢想)成真啊!

除了藝術,維也納的咖啡館也很有名,做的糕點挺出色。

有一種蛋糕,叫薩赫蛋糕,裏面有果醬與幾層巧克力,聽說非常好吃。

我本來想在去年十二月時去維也納的,可是疫情爆發後,甚麼地方也去不了。

希望一兩年後,世界各地情況會有改善,我終於可以去逛一逛。

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kidneyprivilege

July 10, 2021

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Thank you!

2021/07/08


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將來有空時,我想去維也納一遊。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我是在幾年前在網上看到文章後,對這個城市開始感到興趣。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

當時我還是大學生,沒有很多錢,不能想去就去。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

雖然我沒有錢,但還能上網查資料。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

除了在網上找見聞,還從圖書館裏借了幾本旅遊指南來看。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我覺得維也納這個城市挺適合我。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

它是一個藝術都市,有幾位我喜歡的畫家都是來自哪裏。


它是一個藝術都市,有幾位我喜歡的畫家都是來自裏。

對於超愛逛博物館的我來說,真是願望成真啊!


對於超愛逛博物館的我來說,真是願望(夢想)成真啊!

除了藝術,維也納的咖啡館也很有名,做的糕點挺出色。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有一種蛋糕,叫薩赫蛋糕,裏面有果醬與幾層巧克力,聽說非常好吃。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我本來想在去年十二月時去維也納的,可是疫情爆發後,甚麼地方也去不了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

希望一兩年後,世界各地情況會有改善,我終於可以去哪逛一逛。


希望一兩年後,世界各地情況會有改善,我終於可以去逛一逛。

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