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2021/07/06

我在年初時開始寫日記這個習慣。除了紀錄那天做的事情,我還會寫下自己的想法與感受。如果寫下了煩惱,我再不會胡思亂想,心情就自然輕鬆了多。而且我的記憶挺差,做了的事很快就不記得,有許多事情就是這樣完全忘記了,感到遺憾。雖然忘掉的記憶無可補救,但現在開始紀錄也行了。剛開始時,我每週寫一次,每次寫一段左右。現在我每週會寫幾次,每次都寫幾頁。我上個月開始用中文寫日記,比我用英文寫的簡單多。但我知道,如果繼續努力練習,一定會進步。總有一天,我能清楚地用中文表達我的感受。


I started journaling at the beginning of the year. Other than recording what I did, I also write down my thoughts and feelings. When I write down things that are bothering me, they don't trouble me as much and my mood instantly gets better. Another reason why I like journaling is because I have a terrible memory. I forget what I did very quickly, which is how I forgot a lot of things that I actually want to remember. I regret not writing them down, but there's nothing I can do about that now. As long as I start now, it's okay. When I first started, I write once a week. I write a short paragraph every time. Nowadays, I write multiple times a week and several pages at a time. Last month, I started journaling in Chinese as well. The entries I write in Chinese are very simple compared to the ones I write in English. However, I know that I'll definitely improve if I continue to practice. One day, I'll be able to express my thoughts in Chinese as clearly as I do in English.

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2021/07/06

我在年初時開始寫日記這個習慣。

除了紀錄那天做的事情,我還會寫下自己的想法與感受。

如果寫下了煩惱,我再不會胡思亂想,心情就自然輕鬆了多。

而且我的記憶挺差,做了的事很快就不記得,有許多事情就是這樣完全忘記了,感到有點遺憾。

雖然忘掉的記憶無可補救,但現在開始紀錄也行了。還未遲了,(正所謂亡羊補牢,猶未遲也。)

亡羊補牢,猶未遲也 = 羊丟了再去修補羊圈還不算晚。比喻出了問題以后想辦法補救可以防止繼續受損失。亡:逃亡,丟失;牢:關牲口的圈。

剛開始時,我每週寫一次,每次寫一段左右。

現在我每週會寫幾次,每次都寫幾頁。

我上個月開始用中文寫日記,比我用英文寫的起用英文寫難多了。/ ¶
我用中文寫的日記比起用英文寫的,用字比較
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You mean it is more difficult to use Chinese to write than to use english, right?

但我知道,如果繼續努力練習,一定會進步。

總有一天,我能清楚地用中文表達我的感受。

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kidneyprivilege

July 7, 2021

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Thank you so much! Your corrections are always so helpful.

2021/07/06


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我在年初時開始寫日記這個習慣。


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除了紀錄那天做的事情,我還會寫下自己的想法與感受。


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如果寫下了煩惱,我再不會胡思亂想,心情就自然輕鬆了多。


如果寫下了煩惱,我再不會胡思亂想,心情就自然輕鬆了多。

而且我的記憶挺差,做了的事很快就不記得,有許多事情就是這樣完全忘記了,感到遺憾。


而且我的記憶挺差,做了的事很快就不記得,有許多事情就是這樣完全忘記了,感到有點遺憾。

雖然忘掉的記憶無可補救,但現在開始紀錄也行了。


雖然忘掉的記憶無可補救,但現在開始紀錄也行了。還未遲了,(正所謂亡羊補牢,猶未遲也。)

亡羊補牢,猶未遲也 = 羊丟了再去修補羊圈還不算晚。比喻出了問題以后想辦法補救可以防止繼續受損失。亡:逃亡,丟失;牢:關牲口的圈。

剛開始時,我每週寫一次,每次寫一段左右。


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現在我每週會寫幾次,每次都寫幾頁。


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我上個月開始用中文寫日記,比我用英文寫的簡單多。


我上個月開始用中文寫日記,比我用英文寫的起用英文寫難多了。/ ¶
我用中文寫的日記比起用英文寫的,用字比較
簡單

You mean it is more difficult to use Chinese to write than to use english, right?

但我知道,如果繼續努力練習,一定會進步。


但我知道,如果繼續努力練習,一定會進步。

總有一天,我能清楚地用中文表達我的感受。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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