Jan. 25, 2021
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People are beginning to blame others after the plague explosion of Taoyuan’s hospital. While hearing these points, I was shocked, particularly when they were coming from someone I know well. People’s emotions can be easily manipulated by anything they are not familiar with, the disease is just one of them. Horror is an eternal topic that hunts mankind’s history, and being afraid of alien form does dominate people’s fragile minds. Struggling with figuring out the truth of all Covid-19’s details has been portrayed as a whole world’s huge obstacle, including the origin of virus, the process of diffusion at the very beginning, and the impact from pandemic to the globe. Unknown perhaps does not come from the accident but from the purpose. Fear always could turn into a structure of scapegoat hunting, but I am wondering when the lessons will be learned that the disease can be defeated by the knowledge as well as the fear can be defeated by the truth.
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People are beginning to blame others after the plague explosion ofded at Taoyuan’s hospital.
While hearing these points, I wasfelt shocked, particularly when they were coming from someone I know well.
You were grammatically correct but 'felt' is a bit more natural sounding than 'was'.
People’s emotions can be easily manipulated by anything they are not familiar with, the disease is just one of them.
Horror is an eternal topic that haunts mankind’s history, and being afraid of alien form doesthings can dominate people’s fragile minds.
Struggling with figuring out the truth of all Covid-19’s details has been portrayed as athe whole world’s huge obstacle, including the origin of virus, the process of diffusion at the very beginning, and the impact from pandemic to the globe.
UThe unknown perhaps does not come from the accident but from the purpose.
Fear can always could turn into a structure of scapegoat huntingpersecution, but I am wondering when the lessons will be learned that theis disease can be defeated by the knowledge as well as the fear can be defeated by the truth.
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Very well done! Keep up the good work.
Jan. 27, 2021
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People are beginning to blame others after the plague explosion of Taoyuan’s hospital. People are beginning to blame others after the plague explo |
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While hearing these points, I was shocked, particularly when they were coming from someone I know well. While hearing these points, I You were grammatically correct but 'felt' is a bit more natural sounding than 'was'. |
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People’s emotions can be easily manipulated by anything they are not familiar with, the disease is just one of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Horror is an eternal topic that hunts mankind’s history, and being afraid of alien form does dominate people’s fragile minds. Horror is an eternal topic that haunts mankind’s history, and being afraid of alien |
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Struggling with figuring out the truth of all Covid-19’s details has been portrayed as a whole world’s huge obstacle, including the origin of virus, the process of diffusion at the very beginning, and the impact from pandemic to the globe. Struggling with figuring out the truth of all Covid-19’s details has been portrayed as |
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Unknown perhaps does not come from the accident but from the purpose.
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Fear always could turn into a structure of scapegoat hunting, but I am wondering when the lessons will be learned that the disease can be defeated by the knowledge as well as the fear can be defeated by the truth. Fear can always |
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