Jan. 25, 2021
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The term "hardship" can't adequately describe what Hong Kongers have been through during the last year. On the morning of January 6, 2021, dozens of Hong Kong citizens were arrested by PRC-backed police under the charge of "subversion of state power" for participating in the 2020 primary election. The charges against them included being uncooperative with government agendas, attempting to block annual budgets, and damaging the Hong Kong government’s operation plans for last year’s primary election. These crimes were regarded as attempts to "subvert the state," according to a Hong Kong police officer, and yet the covered truth behind this manhunt action goes without saying.
As a bumpy ride of democratization reaching another extreme obstacle in 2020, the youth’s protest was only an alarm of how Hong Kong society’s inequality is getting worse. The right of citizenship is no longer to protect people. On the contrary, the law transforms into a series of policies forcing people to exile from their hometown. Whether the skyscraping estate price that embodies the disaster between the state’s economic scheme and neoliberalism, the freedom of expression which is rapidly vanishing, or the education that is supposed to liberate people’s thoughts but turns into an assimilation of patriotism, all have become a part of cruel scenario in Hong Kong’s daily milieu.
“One country, Two system” veils China’s guile, working as the same as their rhetoric of “Peaceful Rising.” After 1997, Hong Kong was playing a role as a cash machine to mainland, yet people’s political rights were severely restricted, prompting the gap between rich and poor to be dramatically increased. “Disposable” is an experience from Hong Kongers’ life, not just an adjective, which is enhanced by CCP’s nationalism and silences the different voices. 2021’s arrest must be learned through this historical procedure. Hong Kong’s protest still waits for witnesses and justice from the entire world.
The term "hardship" can't adequately describe what Hong Kongers have been through during the last year.
On the morning of January 6, 2021, dozens of Hong Kong citizens were arrested by PRC-backed police under the charge of "subversion of state power" for participating in the 2020 primary election.
The charges against them included being uncooperative with government agendacies, attempting to block annual budgets, and damaging the Hong Kong government’s operational plans for last year’s primary election.
I assume the chargers for all arrests have not been resolved yet, so you should use present tense. I don't know how you can "block annual budgets" and the phrase doesn't feel right, but I left it as I am unsure.
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The right of citizenship is no longer to protects people.
On the contrary, the law transformsed into a series of policies that forcinge people into exile from their hometown.
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"daily milieu", while correct, is a rare phrase to hear nowadays.
“One country, Two systems” veils China’s guile, working as the same as their rhetoric of “Peaceful Rising.” After 1997, Hong Kong was playing a role as a cash machine to the mainland, yet people’s political rights were severely restricted, prompting the gap between rich and poor to bincrease dramatically increased.
“Disposable” is an experience ofrom Hong Kongers’ life, not just an adjective, which is enhanced by CCP’s nationalism and silences the different voices.
2021’s arrests must be learned throughremembered during this historical procedureevent.
Hong Kong’s protest still waits for witnesses and justice from the entire world.
Feb. 24, 2021
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A hardship day wouldn’t be able to describe what Hongkongers have got. |
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In the morning of 2021 01 06, dozens of Hongkong citizens were arrested under the charge of subversion of state power due to the campaign in which they participated for the 2020 primary election. |
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“These activities of being uncooperative with the authority’s every agendas, attempting to block the annual budgets, and damaging the Hongkong government’s operation formed the plans of last year’s primary election, which must be regarded as the crime of subverting the state,” reported by a Hongkong officer, and yet the covered truth behind this manhunt action goes without saying. |
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As a bumpy ride of democratization reaching another extreme obstacle in 2020, the youth’s protest was only an alarm of how Hongkong society’s inequality is getting worse. |
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The right of citizenship is no longer to protect people. The right of citizenship |
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On the contrary, the law transforms into a series of policies forcing people to exile from their hometown. On the contrary, the law transform |
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Whether the skyscraping estate price that embodies the disaster between the state’s economic scheme and neoliberalism, the freedom of expression which is rapidly vanishing, or the education that is supposed to liberate people’s thoughts but turns into an assimilation of patriotism, all have become a part of cruel scenario in Hongkong’s daily milieu. |
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“One country, Two system” veils China’s guile, working as the same as their rhetoric of “Peaceful Rising.” After 1997, Hongkong was playing a role as a cash machine to mainland, yet people’s political rights were severely restricted, prompting the gap between rich and poor to be dramatically increased. |
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“Disposable” is an experience from Hongkongers’ life, not just an adjective, which is enhanced by CCP’s nationalism and silences the different voices. |
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2021’s arrest must be learned through this historical procedure. 2021’s arrests must be |
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Hongkong’s protest still waits for witnesses and justice from the entire world. |
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The term "hardship" can't adequately describe what Hong Kongers have been through during the last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the morning of January 6, 2021, dozens of Hong Kong citizens were arrested by PRC-backed police under the charge of "subversion of state power" for participating in the 2020 primary election. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The charges against them included being uncooperative with government agendas, attempting to block annual budgets, and damaging the Hong Kong government’s operation plans for last year’s primary election. The charges against them include I assume the chargers for all arrests have not been resolved yet, so you should use present tense. I don't know how you can "block annual budgets" and the phrase doesn't feel right, but I left it as I am unsure. |
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These crimes were regarded as attempts to "subvert the state," according to a Hong Kong police officer, and yet the covered truth behind this manhunt action goes without saying. These crimes were regarded as attempts to "subvert the state," according to a Hong Kong police officer, and yet the |
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As a bumpy ride of democratization reaching another extreme obstacle in 2020, the youth’s protest was only an alarm of how Hong Kong society’s inequality is getting worse. As |
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Whether the skyscraping estate price that embodies the disaster between the state’s economic scheme and neoliberalism, the freedom of expression which is rapidly vanishing, or the education that is supposed to liberate people’s thoughts but turns into an assimilation of patriotism, all have become a part of cruel scenario in Hong Kong’s daily milieu.
"daily milieu", while correct, is a rare phrase to hear nowadays. |
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“One country, Two system” veils China’s guile, working as the same as their rhetoric of “Peaceful Rising.” After 1997, Hong Kong was playing a role as a cash machine to mainland, yet people’s political rights were severely restricted, prompting the gap between rich and poor to be dramatically increased. “One country, Two systems” veils China’s guile, working |
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“Disposable” is an experience from Hong Kongers’ life, not just an adjective, which is enhanced by CCP’s nationalism and silences the different voices. “Disposable” is an experience of |
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Hong Kong’s protest still waits for witnesses and justice from the entire world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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