She didn't get it againOnce again, she didn't accept his offer. Once again, she didn't accept his offer.

She didn't get it againAgain she wasn't happy with it. Again she wasn't happy with it.

I have no idea what your original sentence means.

There' was a guy who  always wishesd for something. There was a guy who always wished for something.

TOnce there' was a guyman who  always wishesd for somethings. Once there was a man who always wished for things.

1. In a fairy tale it is almost always past tense used - this story is not happening right now. 2. Overly casual start "There's a guy" is something you'd say to point out a man at a bus stop. 3. "Something" is a specific item, while the general plural noun "things" is a broad category.

One day he was told from oneby a mysterious woman that if he sprinkle thed salts ton the magpie's taile then he could really get what he wishes. One day he was told by a mysterious woman that if he sprinkled salts on the magpie's tail then he could really get what he wishes.

One day he was told from oneby a mysterious woman that if he sprinkle thed salts to on the magpie's taile then he cwould really get what he wishesd for. One day he was told by a mysterious woman that if he sprinkled salt on the magpie's tail then he would really get what he wished for.

1. "salts" = chemical compounds that include a large number of substances; salt = table salt. 2. Tale = story; Tail = end part of an animal.

When he found the macgpie and tryhe tried to sprinkle the salts on it, but he couldn't because the macgpie kept moving. When he found the magpie he tried to sprinkle the salt on it, but he couldn't because the magpie kept moving.

careful with tense alignment.

When he found the macgpie and tryied to sprinkle the salts but, he couldn't because the macgpie kept moving. When he found the magpie and tried to sprinkle the salts, he couldn't because the magpie kept moving.

She, the macgpie, could actually could speak and she talked toold the guy that if he wanted to sprinkle the salts, he had to get her a pocket knife. She, the magpie, could actually speak and she told the guy that if he wanted to sprinkle the salts, he had to get her a pocket knife.

She, tThe macgpie, actually could speak and she talked to the guyold the man that if he wanted to sprinkle the salts on her, he had to getbring her a pocket knife. The magpie actually could speak and she told the man that if he wanted to sprinkle the salt on her, he had to bring her a pocket knife.

"talk" and "tell" are two different verbs. Here she is being directive so she is directing/telling him to do something, not talking to him in a conversation.

how could he get thefind a pocket knife? how could he find a pocket knife?

As written it sounds as if there is one, singular knife he needs to obtain - when in fact it is a general request for one kind of thing. Use the indefinite article (a) not the definite article (the).

He picked blueberries buckets and bucketsdecided to pick buckets of blueberries and then sell them. He decided to pick buckets of blueberries and then sell them.

I have merged the next sentence with this one for achieving a better flow.

He picked blueberries buckets and buckets. of blueberries. He picked buckets and buckets of blueberries.

He brought it to the macgpie. He brought it to the magpie.

He brought it to the macgpie. He brought it to the magpie.

She then told him that she wanted a sled at this time. She then told him that she wanted a sled this time.

She then told him she wanted a sled at this time. She then told him she wanted a sled this time.

"at this time" = now "this time" - one of a sequential serie4s of events

how could he get thea sled? how could he get a sled?

Use the indefinite article (a) not the definite article (the).

He carved some toys for children, wooden spoons, and cutting boards using his pocket knife and sold all of them at the market. He carved some toys for children, wooden spoons and cutting boards using his pocket knife and sold all of them at the market.

She said it should've been made of silver and gold. She said it should've been made of silver and gold.

She said it shoud'veld have been made of silver and gold. She said it should have been made of silver and gold.

LIke this way She had him to get more big andShe convinced him to get bigger and more expensive ones tofor her. She convinced him to get bigger and more expensive ones for her.

LIke this way She haShe asked him to get morea bigger and more expensive ones to for her. She asked him to get a bigger and more expensive one for her.

I am not sure what your original sentence means.

Then he finally geot a castle and large amounts of golds. Then he finally got a castle and large amounts of gold.

Then he finall gety obtained a castle and a large amount of golds. Then he finally obtained a castle and a large amount of gold.

Gold is a singular not countable noun meaning money.

Finally She determined him to sprinkle the salts toNow she accepted to get salts sprinkled on her tail by him. Now she accepted to get salts sprinkled on her tail by him.

I replaced "finally" with "now" because you had already used "finally" in the previous sentence.

Finally Sshe dletermined him to sprinkle the salts tosalt on her tail. Finally she let him sprinkle salt on her tail.

But he couldn't think aboutof anything he didn't have. But he couldn't think of anything he didn't have.

But now he couldn't think aboutof anything he didn't already have. But now he couldn't think of anything he didn't already have.

tThe magpie flew awaym , back into the forest to wait for another man who washad been always wishing. The magpie flew away, back into the forest to wait for another man who had been always wishing.

tThe magpie flew awaym , back into the forest to wait for another man who was always wishing. The magpie flew away, back to the forest to wait for another man who was always wishing.