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A & B Talk69

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eat nearby?
A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know. I'm sure there are many places. I'll check it out. What are you in the mood for?
B: What kind of restaurants, for example?
A: I just checked Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on. I think you can find most of them. How much is your budget?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see. Then I'll show you a picture of the stores around here. Here they are. They may have mixed up some different ones.
B: Oh, nice!
A: Can you decide?
B: This place looks nice. Is this fried chicken?
A: This is "Karaage". It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter. Maybe.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do? Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes! I'll eat it and see the difference.
A: Nice idea! I'll check the place now. Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near here. But I'm sure they have everything else. Sorry
B: It's totally alright. Well, Here then!
A: Oh, tempura! Ok! I got it! Well, I'm sorry. This restaurant wasn't close by either. Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eat.
B: Okay, haha. Well, here then! Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec, okay! There is!
Wait a minute. There's the place you chose, and there's other places too! Here.
B: Oh, nice. Well, do you guess what flavor is this?
A: Umm, miso, I think. And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
It consists of noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten. The dish is a very popular in Japan.
B: I see. Well, mmm...let me see. This place looks good. I'll go for here.
A: This place? This place is probably miso type. Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app road.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem. Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are! This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: I bet you. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too!

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A & B Talk69

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

I'll check it out.

What are you in the mood for?

B: What kind of restaurants, for example?

I think you can find most of them.

B: Well, about 2,000 yen.

A: I see.

B: Oh, nice!

B: This place looks nice.

Is this fried chicken?

A: This is "Karaage".

It's like fried chicken.

B: What's the difference?

A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.

Maybe.

B: I see.

A: So what do you want to do?

Go for "Karaage"?

B: Yes!

Sorry

A: Oh, tempura!

I got it!

B: Okay, haha.

Ramen!

A: Hold on a sec, okay!

Wait a minute.

Here.

B: Oh, nice.

A: Umm, miso, I think.

And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.

B: Tsukemen?

B: I see.

Well, mmm...let me see.

This place looks good.

A: This place?

Is this okay?

B: Yes.

B: Oh, thanks!

A: No problem.

Okay, let's go.

B: Isn't it right there?

A: Uh, no, it's not.

Here we are!

This is it.

B: Thank you very much!

Have a nice day!

B: Thanks!

You too!

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July 13, 2022

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I'll check it out.

What are you in the mood for?

I think you can find most of them.

B: Well, about 2,000 yen.

A: I see.

Here they are.

B: Oh, nice!

B: This place looks nice.

Is this fried chicken?

It's like fried chicken.

B: What's the difference?

A: So what do you want to do?

Go for "Karaage"?

B: Yes!

Sorry

B: It's totally alright.

A: Oh, tempura!

Ok!

I got it!

B: Okay, haha.

Well, here then!

Ramen!

A: Hold on a sec, okay!

Wait a minute.

There's the place you chose, and there's other places too!

Here.

B: Oh, nice.

Well, do you guess what flavor is this?

A: Umm, miso, I think.

And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.

B: Tsukemen?

B: I see.

This place looks good.

A: This place?

Is this okay?

B: Yes.

B: Oh, thanks!

A: No problem.

Okay, let's go.

B: Isn't it right there?

A: Uh, no, it's not.

Here we are!

This is it.

B: Thank you very much!

Have a nice day!

B: Thanks!

You too!

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July 12, 2022

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Well, mmm...let me see.


Well, mhmm... let me see. Well, hmm... let me see.

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This place looks good.


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I'll go for here.


I'll go for here. I'll go here.

I'll go for hereit. I'll go for it.

or I'll go there.

A: This place?


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Ramen!


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A: Hold on a sec, okay!


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There is!


There it is! There it is!

There isYeah, that's a ramen place! Yeah, that's a ramen place!

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Wait a minute.


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A & B Talk69


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences? Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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🙏


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignwith English speakers. Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


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B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eat nearby?


B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eatrestaurants nearby? B: Excuse me, do you know any restaurants nearby?

Your sentence is correct but this is more how'd we say it in the US.

A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know.


A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know. A: I don't live here, so I don't know.

A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't really know. A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't really know.

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I'm sure there are many places.


I'm sure there are many placesa lot. I'm sure there are a lot.

I'm sure there are manylots of places. I'm sure there are lots of places.

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I'll check it out.


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What are you in the mood for?


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B: What kind of restaurants, for example?


B: WLike what kind of restaurants, for example? B: Like what kind of restaurants?

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A: I just checked Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on.


A: I just checkedfound some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori, and so on. A: I just found some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori.

A: I just checked for Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on. A: I just checked for Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I think you can find most of them.


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How much is your budget?


How much iWhat's your budget? What's your budget?

How much isdid your budget want to spend? How much did you want to spend?

We don't usually ask what people's budgets are in the US. or How much were you looking to spend?

B: Well, about 2,000 yen.


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A: I see.


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Then I'll show you a picture of the stores around here.


Then I'll show you asome pictures of the storerestaurants around here. Then I'll show you some pictures of the restaurants around here.

Then I'llI can show you a pictures of the stores around here. I can show you pictures of the stores around here.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Here they are.


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Here they areyou go. Here you go.

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They may have mixed up some different ones.


They may have mixed up some different ones. They may have mixed up some different ones.

This sentence is unclear. Maybe you meant something like this: "They're in no particular order" or "Some of the pictures might show other restaurants"

They may havight be mixed up some different ones. They might be mixed up.

I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess at editing it.

B: Oh, nice!


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A: Can you decide?


A: Can you decideWhat do you think? A: What do you think?

The sentence sounds impatient and slightly rude as written, e.g. "Can you hurry up?"

A: Can you decideWhat do you think? A: What do you think?

We'd never ask this in the US.

B: This place looks nice.


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Is this fried chicken?


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A: This is "Karaage".


A: This iIt's "Karaage". A: It's "Karaage".

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It's like fried chicken.


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B: What's the difference?


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A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.


A: Well, I don't know'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter. A: Well, I'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.

"I don't know" sounds to me like the speaker has no idea at all, but the speaker seems to have an idea of what karaage is.

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Maybe.


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B: I see.


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A: So what do you want to do?


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Go for "Karaage"?


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B: Yes!


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I'll eat it and see the difference.


I'll eattry it and see if I can tell the difference. I'll try it and see if I can tell the difference.

I'll eattry it and see the differencwhat it's like. I'll try it and see what it's like.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Nice idea!


A: NiceGood idea! A: Good idea!

A: NiceGood idea!. A: Good idea.

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I'll check the place now.


I'll check the placad over there now. I'll head over there now.

I'll check the place nowit out. I'll check it out.

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Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near here.


Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near hereHmm, the restaurant is pretty far away. Hmm, the restaurant is pretty far away.

WellOops, I'm sorry, this place isn't near hereclose by. Oops, I'm sorry, this place isn't close by.

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But I'm sure they have everything else.


But I'm sure they have everyre's something elcloser. But I'm sure there's something closer.

Ambiguous as written

But I'm sure they have everyre's something else. But I'm sure there's something else.

I think this is what you're trying to say but I'm not sure.

Sorry


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B: It's totally alright.


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B: It's totally alrightNo worries. B: No worries.

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Well, Here then!


Well, Hhere then! Well, here then!

Well, Here thenOh, look! Oh, look!

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A: Oh, tempura!


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Ok!


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OkAwesome! Awesome!

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I got it!


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Well, I'm sorry.


WellOops, I'm sorry. Oops, I'm sorry.

Well, I'm sorryOops. Oops.

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This restaurant wasn't close by either.


This restaurant waisn't close by either. This restaurant isn't close either.

This restaurant waisn't close by either. This restaurant isn't close by either.

This sentence is present tense.

Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eat.


Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choicIf we can't find anything close, I'll make you a dish you actually want to eat. If we can't find anything close, I'll make you a dish you actually want to eat.

Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eatyou can't find a restaurant, I'll make you something for you. Next time, if you can't find a restaurant, I'll make you something for you.

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B: Okay, haha.


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Well, here then!


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Well, here thenOh, look! Oh, look!

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There's the place you chose, and there's other places too!


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There's the place you chose, and there's are other places too! There's the place you chose, and there are other places too!

Here.


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B: Oh, nice.


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Well, do you guess what flavor is this?


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Well, docan you guess what flavor this this? Well, can you guess what flavor this is?

Question sentences can be hard but this is the order in which we'd say it.

A: Umm, miso, I think.


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And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.


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B: Tsukemen?


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It consists of noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten.


It consist's of noodles which are dipped in a separateanother bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten. It's of noodles which are dipped in a another bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten.

Consists is correct but sounds a little too formal for the conversation. It would fit in well on a Wikipedia entry, for example.

It consists ofhas noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten first. It has noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth first.

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The dish is a very popular in Japan.


The dish is aIt's very popular in Japan. It's very popular in Japan.

Theis dish is a very popular in Japan. This dish is very popular in Japan.

We don't need the "a" article here.

B: I see.


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This place is probably miso type.


This place is probably miso typejust serves miso. This place probably just serves miso.

This place is probably a miso type. This place is probably a miso type.

Here, we need the "a" article because we're talking about one particular restaurant.

Is this okay?


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B: Yes.


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A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app road.


A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app roadopen it in maps. A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let open it in maps.

A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me setpull up the directions in the app road. A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me pull up the directions in the app.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Oh, thanks!


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A: No problem.


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Okay, let's go.


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B: Isn't it right there?


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A: Uh, no, it's not.


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Here we are!


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This is it.


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B: Thank you very much!


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A: I bet you.


A: I bet you.No problem! A: No problem!

Unclear

A: I bet youNo problem. A: No problem.

We'd never say, "I bet you," in the US.

Have a nice day!


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B: Thanks!


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You too!


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