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Assignment "My Biography"

Hello! I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for correcting my mistakes.
Today I'm making this assignment earlier so I'll have free time later.

What were the three most important achievements in your life?

1 Reading books by myself.

2 Learning languages; including English and Japanese.

3 I learned some of my highschool's subjects on my own

Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.

Due to COVID-19 quarantine I felt depressed, where I couldn't do much to improve my situation. I used to escape from my reality to a game called genshin impact but then I started to read books and see a brand new reality; I started to take control of myself even when a chaos was around me.

Describe your school routine.
I read my highschool's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.
Sometimes I complete them earlier to have free time later.

What do you do in your free time?
I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.

What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?

-Making easier to keep all my hobbies and school activities up.
-Mastering my skills.
-Improving my actual situation.

Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.

Sadness and rage.
Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actual situation and I'm doing my best to understand and control my emotions.

What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?
I write a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I make exercise, I learn languages and I learn physics with a lovely professor, I'm trying to be grateful everytime I can.

What are your plans after finishing high school?

I want to study and live in a safe country, I would like teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography and I wish being a fashion designer.

Would you like to study for a degree? Which one? Which university?
I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.

What would you like to work on?
Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.

What is your greatest goal?
To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.

What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?
Ego, and changing my life's perspective.

Write a half page reflection on what you learned during this English modules and how they contributed to your formation.

During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English.
I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.
I learned how to conjugate and when should I use the words "were" and "was".
I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents in English without feeling unconfortable.
This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically my English mistakes.
Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world.
Therefore, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future. I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.
These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.

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Assignment "My Biography"

Hello!

I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for correcting my mistakes.

1 Reading books by myself.

2 Learning languages; including English and Japanese.

Describe your school routine.

What do you do in your free time?

I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.

What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?

-Mastering my skills.

Sadness and rage.

What are your plans after finishing high school?

Would you like to study for a degree?

Which one?

Which university?

I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.

What would you like to work on?

Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.

What is your greatest goal?

What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?

Ego, and changing my life's perspective.

I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.

I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.

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3 I learned some of my high school's subjects on my own.

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-Making easier to keep all Trying to make my life more organised so that I can keep up with all of my hobbies and school activities up.

Let me know what you wanted to say!

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Hello!

I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for correcting my mistakes.

What were the three most important achievements in your life?

Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.

Describe your school routine.

What do you do in your free time?

I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.

What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?

What are your plans after finishing high school?

Would you like to study for a degree?

Which one?

Which university?

What would you like to work on?

Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.

What is your greatest goal?

To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.

What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?

I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.

I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.

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3 I learned some of my subjects in high school's subjects on my own.

The subjects didn't belong to the high school, so it's better to say "subjects in high school".

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What were the three most important achievements in your life?

1 Reading books by myself.

Describe your school routine.

I read my highschool's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.

What do you do in your free time?

What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?

-Mastering my skills.

Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.

Sadness and rage.

What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?

What are your plans after finishing high school?

Would you like to study for a degree?

Which one?

Which university?

I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.

What would you like to work on?

What is your greatest goal?

To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.

What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?

I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.

Therefore, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.

I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.

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Sometimes I complete them earlier to have free time later.


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What do you do in your free time?


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I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.


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Assignment "My Biography"


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Hello!


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I hope you're doing well :)


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Thank you for correcting my mistakes.


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Today I'm making this assignment earlier so I'll have free time later.


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What were the three most important achievements in your life?


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1 Reading books by myself.


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2 Learning languages; including English and Japanese.


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3 I learned some of my highschool's subjects on my own


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Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.


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Due to COVID-19 quarantine I felt depressed, where I couldn't do much to improve my situation.


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I used to escape from my reality to a game called genshin impact but then I started to read books and see a brand new reality; I started to take control of myself even when a chaos was around me.


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Describe your school routine.


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I read my highschool's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.


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What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?


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-Making easier to keep all my hobbies and school activities up.


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-Making easier to keep all Trying to make my life more organised so that I can keep up with all of my hobbies and school activities up. - Trying to make my life more organised so that I can keep up with all of my hobbies and school activities.

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-Mastering my skills.


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-Improving my actual situation.


-Improving my actualcurrent situation. -Improving my current situation.

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Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.


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Sadness and rage.


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Sadness and rage. Sadness and rage.

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Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actual situation and I'm doing my best to understand and control my emotions.


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What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?


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What are you doing to overcome thoese difficulties? What are you doing to overcome these difficulties?

I write a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I make exercise, I learn languages and I learn physics with a lovely professor, I'm trying to be grateful everytime I can.


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What are your plans after finishing high school?


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I want to study and live in a safe country, I would like teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography and I wish being a fashion designer.


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Would you like to study for a degree?


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Which one?


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Which university?


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I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.


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What would you like to work on?


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Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.


Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer. Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.

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What is your greatest goal?


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To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.


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To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard or small it is. To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard or small it is.

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What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?


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Ego, and changing my life's perspective.


Ego, and changing my life's perspective on life. Ego, and changing my perspective on life.

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Write a half page reflection on what you learned during this English modules and how they contributed to your formation.


Write a half page reflection on what you learned during thisese English modules and how they contributed to your formation. Write a half page reflection on what you learned during these English modules and how they contributed to your formation.

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Write a half page reflection on what you learned during thisese English modules and how they contributed to your formation. Write a half page reflection on what you learned during these English modules and how they contributed to your formation.

During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English.


During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicatetalk about people, how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English. During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to talk about people, how to go to a specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English.

During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate to people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters, and I learned how to express myself fluently in English. During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate to people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters, and I learned how to express myself fluently in English.

During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I l learned how to indicate people how to go to an specific placegive directions, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express myself fluently in English. During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I l learned how to give directions, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express myself fluently in English.

I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.


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I learned how to conjugate and when should I use the words "were" and "was".


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I learned how to conjugate and when I should I use the words "were" and "was". I learned how to conjugate and when I should use the words "were" and "was".

I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents in English without feeling unconfortable.


I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents in English without feeling unconmfortable. I also improved my English pronunciation and understanding so I can consume content in English without feeling uncomfortable.

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This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically my English mistakes.


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Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world.


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Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world. Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with plenty of people all over the world.

Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty/a plethora of people from all over the world. Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with plenty/a plethora of people from all over the world.

Therefore, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.


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Therefore, I learned about myself;: about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future. Therefore, I learned about myself: about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.

Thereforeus/In conclusion, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future. Thus/In conclusion, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.

I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.


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These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.


These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gavetaught me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English. These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they taught me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.

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These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson that is; teaching me that it is important to remember that I'm not perfect so, and that I should focus on improving and trying over and over again until I master English and my other goals. These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson; teaching me that it is important to remember that I'm not perfect, and that I should focus on improving and trying over and over again until I master English and my other goals.

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