TheOnce again, Trump administration has taken office. Once again, Trump administration has taken office.

In my concern, firstly, First of all, I am concerned his policy canof undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing accepting diversity. First of all, I am concerned his policy of undermining accepting diversity.

In my concern, firstly, My first concern is that his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity. My first concern is that his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

You can also say, "Firstly, in my opinion, his policy can..."

In my concern, firstly, Firstly, I'm concerned that his policy canies may undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity. Firstly, I'm concerned that his policies may undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

InAs for my concerns, firstly, his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity. As for my concerns, firstly, his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

MY GUESS: In his inaugural speech, he clearly stated that there are only men and women in the worldtwo genders. MY GUESS: In his inaugural speech, he clearly stated that there are only two genders.

In his inaugural speech, he clearly stated that there are only men and women in the world. In his inaugural speech, he clearly stated that there are only men and women in the world.

You have a tendency to add 2 spaces instead of 1, so please keep a lookout for that! Oftentimes, this is the only correction I have to make.

The trends in the Us.S. could pushreduce progressive tendencies in Japan back. The trends in the U.S. could reduce progressive tendencies in Japan.

The trends in the UsS could pushset Japan back as well. The trends in the US could set Japan back as well.

Among them, firingit has become easier to fire staff who disagree with his administration’sve decisions is the worst. Among them, it has become easier to fire staff who disagree with administrative decisions.

Will the US.S. become an authoritarian state (like Russia)? Will the U.S. become an authoritarian state (like Russia)?

All we Japanese (people) can do is watch. All we Japanese (people) can do is watch.

Generally, Japanese (and other nationalities ending in -ese like Chinese or Sudanese) is used as an adjective, not as a noun.

TheALSO POSSIBLE: Trump a's Administration, Ver. 2 ALSO POSSIBLE: Trump's Administration, Ver. 2

Although itTrump's a problemesidency may be a headache for many those in another country, iies. It may also be of concern to usmany Japanese as well, because the influential. To me, President Trump has put forward selfish policies that could overturn the status quo.reputed benefit the USA alone, overturning decades of previous policies. Trump's presidency may be a headache for many those in other countries. It may also be of concern to many Japanese as well. To me, President Trump has put forward selfish policies that reputed benefit the USA alone, overturning decades of previous policies.

Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo. Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo.

Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo. Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo.

Although it's a problem in another country's problem, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo. Although it's another country's problem, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo.

Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to (us Japanesein Japan/Japanese people) as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn shake up the status quo. Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to (us in Japan/Japanese people) as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could shake up the status quo.

"overturn the status quo" sounds like there's a specific status quo you have in mind.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US. Minorities, such as LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US. Minorities, such as LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

Since you're already saying "such," you don't need to say "like" as well since you're already making the comparison.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US. Minorities, such as LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US. Minorities, such as LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

"such as" and "like" are a little redundant as they both read here like giving an example. LGBTQ+ is generally used as an adjective.

In Japan, transgender issues are now gradually coming to light and pubic awareness of them is increasing. In Japan, transgender issues are now gradually coming to light and pubic awareness of them is increasing.

In Japan, transgender issues are now gradually coming to light and pubic awareness [about them] is increasing. In Japan, transgender issues are now gradually coming to light and pubic awareness [about them] is increasing.

In Japan, transgender issues are just now gradually coming to light, and public awareness is increasing. In Japan, transgender issues are just now gradually coming to light, and public awareness is increasing.

This correction isn't necessary, but I think it gets across the point better.

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a valid partnership system. Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a valid partnership system.

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to bebeing recognized [as a partnership systemlegal union]. Same-sex marriage has only just begun being recognized [as a legal union].

We don't say 'partnership system' when referring to marriage, instead we're more likely to use terms like "legal union".

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a partnership system., Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a partnership system,

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a legal partnership system. Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a legal partnership.

I'm unsure if I should have erased "system" here because I don't know how Japan refers to partnerships.

Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge shame to mostproblem for pregnant women who don't want to give birth. Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge problem for pregnant women who don't want to give birth.

Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge shame to mostbig issue for pregnant women who don't want to give birth. Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a big issue for pregnant women who don't want to give birth.

"A huge shame" is quite an understatement, I would say. "Shame" makes me think of something that's a minor inconvience *most* of the time. And since "most" pregnant women don't necessary want an abortion, I took it out for clarity.

Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge shame to most pregnantthreat to women who don't want to give birth. Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge threat to women who don't want to give birth.

As ChristianityMY PREFERENCE: Christian fundamentalists does not affectpower in Japanese politics,, and abortion is never considered murder. MY PREFERENCE: Christian fundamentalists do not power in Japan, and abortion is never considered murder.

As Christianity does not affect in Japanese politics, abortion is never considered murder. As Christianity does not affect Japanese politics, abortion is never considered murder.

As Christianity does not affect in Japanese politics, abortion iwas never considered murder. As Christianity does not affect Japanese politics, abortion was never considered murder.

As Christianity does not affect in Japanese politics, abortion is never considered murder. As Christianity does not affect Japanese politics, abortion is never considered murder.

Thirdly, Trump issued a number of terrible executive orders and carried outsuch as XXX and YYY. Thirdly, Trump issued a number of terrible executive orders such as XXX and YYY.

SUGGESTION: Specify which orders which "terrible."

Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders andthat are [being] carried out. Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders that are [being] carried out.

Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders and carried out. Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders.

I think it's unnecessary to add the last part, but you could also say, "Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders that he has both intends to carry out and already has carried out." If someone were saying this in a speech, you could put stress on a few words to make it sound more dire.

Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and had them carried out. Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and had them carried out.

Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and carried them out. Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and carried them out.

The and these trends in the US could push Japan back. and these trends in the US could push Japan back.

I think it's better to connect these two sentences, as they share the same idea: "Japan is making progress, but because of the US, this progress will be set back."

The trends in the US could push Japanese policies back. The trends in the US could push Japanese policies back.