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When Was Your First Love?

It was when I was 11 years old. I was good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feeling. One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend. I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.

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March 1, 2025

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When Was Your First Love?

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.

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Feb. 28, 2025

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When Was Your First Love?

It was when I was 11 years old.

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

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Feb. 28, 2025

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When Was Your First Love?


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It was when I was 11 years old.


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ItMy first love (experience) was when I was 11 (years old). My first love (experience) was when I was 11 (years old).

I was good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feeling.


I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings. I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

OPTION A: I was a good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings. OPTION B: We were good friends and I couldn't tell her my feelings. OPTION A: I was a good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings. OPTION B: We were good friends and I couldn't tell her my feelings.

OPTION B is more succinct.

I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings. I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.


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One day, surprisingly, she started dating my best friend. One day, surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.


I was very shocked but also hoped that they wentgot along well. I was very shocked but also hoped that they got along well.

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I was very shocked but also hoped that theyings went well between them. I was very shocked but also hoped that things went well between them.

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