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The Tokyo Olympic

I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympic are going to be held in this year for several reasons.
First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic haven't settled down yet. Gathering foreign athletes and press would cause the next outbreak in Japan. At least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines spread all over the country. Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices. They require sufficient period of time and competition among various foreign countries. Furthermore, the Tokyo game is no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fee and benefits from tourism. The budget deficit must be inevitable so that we have to give up recovering the construction cost.
In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympic organizing committee, become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries. In my opinion, meaningless meetings and authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypes as well as gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society. I can't help feel embarrassed to let foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is. We have to deal with these issue by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination.
For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympic should be postponed until the pandemic is over.

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Gathering foreign athletes and press would cause the next outbreak in Japan.

I can't help feel embarrassed to let foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is.

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Gathering foreign athletes and press would cause the next outbreak in Japan.

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Gathering foreign athletes and press would cause the next outbreak in Japan.

At least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines spread all over the country.

The budget deficit must be inevitable so that we have to give up recovering the construction cost.

For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympic should be postponed until the pandemic is over.

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The Tokyo Olympic


The Tokyo Olympics The Tokyo Olympics

The Tokyo Olympics The Tokyo Olympics

The Olympics should be plural.

The Tokyo Olympics The Tokyo Olympics

The Tokyo Olympics The Tokyo Olympics

For some reason, "Olympics" in English is both singular and plural.

I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympic are going to be held in this year for several reasons.


I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympics are going to be held in this year for several reasons. I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympics are going to be held in this year for several reasons.

I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympics are going to be held in this year for several reasons. I disagree with the plan that the Tokyo Olympics are going to be held this year for several reasons.

I disagree with the plan that theo hold Tokyo Olympic are going to be held ins this year for several reasons. I disagree with the plan to hold Tokyo Olympics this year for several reasons.

For several reasons, I disagree with the plan thato hold the Tokyo Olympic are going to be held in this year for several reasonss this year. For several reasons, I disagree with the plan to hold the Tokyo Olympics this year.

This makes it more clear that you disagree for several reasons instead of that the Olympics will be held this year for several reasons.

First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic haven't settled down yet.


First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic havesn't settled down yet. First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic hasn't settled down yet.

First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic havesn't settled down yet. First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic hasn't settled down yet.

Hasn't settled down yet is the correct term. Haven't is past tense.

First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic haven's not settled down yet. First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic has not settled down yet.

First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic havesn't settled down yet. First of all, the COVID-19 pandemic hasn't settled down yet.

Gathering foreign athletes and press would cause the next outbreak in Japan.


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At least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines spread all over the country.


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At the very least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines have spread all over the country. At the very least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines have spread all over the country.

At the very least, we should keep waiting until the vaccines spread all overations have been given to everyone throughout the country. At the very least, we should keep waiting until vaccinations have been given to everyone throughout the country.

Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices.


Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices. time. Second, most athletes wouldn't do their best due to the lack of practice time.

Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices. Second, most athletes wouldn't do their best due to the lack of practice.

Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices. Second, most athletes wouldn't do their best due to the lack of practice.

Second, most athletes wouldn't do their bests due to the lack of practices. Second, most athletes won't do their best due to lack of practice.

They require sufficient period of time and competition among various foreign countries.


They require sufficient period of times and competitions held among various foreign countries. They require sufficient period of times and competitions held among various foreign countries.

They require a sufficient period of time and competition among variousin different foreign countries. They require a sufficient period of time and competition in different foreign countries.

"In" sounds better to me here, because you are describing a situation where the athlete is physically in foreign countries.

They require a sufficient period of time and competition among various athletes from foreign countries. They require a sufficient period of time and competition among various athletes from foreign countries.

Furthermore, the Tokyo game is no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fee and benefits from tourism.


Furthermore, the Tokyo game iss are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fee and benefits from tourism. Furthermore, the Tokyo games are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fee and benefits from tourism.

Furthermore, the Tokyo game iss are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fees and benefits from tourism. Furthermore, the Tokyo games are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fees and benefits from tourism.

Furthermore, the Tokyo gGame iss will no longer be profitable if it can't obtain the[for Japan] if ticket fees and benefits from tourism cannot be obtained. Furthermore, the Tokyo Games will no longer be profitable [for Japan] if ticket fees and benefits from tourism cannot be obtained.

This sounds better to me, especially as it is not necessarily the Tokyo gaves that are obtaining benefits from tourism. I would also associate a phrase like "obtain the ticket fee" more with a situation where an actual person is collecting fees.

Furthermore, the Tokyo game iss are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fees and benefits from tourism. Furthermore, the Tokyo games are no longer profitable if it can't obtain the ticket fees and benefits from tourism.

The budget deficit must be inevitable so that we have to give up recovering the construction cost.


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The budget deficit mustwill be inevitable so that we, and we will have to give up recovering the construction cost. The budget deficit will be inevitable, and we will have to give up recovering the construction cost.

The combination of "must be" and "so that" sounds like you are introducing a statement about what should happen, which doesn't quite work here.

The budget deficit must beis inevitable so that we have to give up the hope that we can recovering the construction costs. The budget deficit is inevitable so we have to give up the hope that we can recover the construction costs.

In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympic organizing committee, become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries.


In addition, the sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries. In addition, the sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries.

In addition, the sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, becoame highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries. In addition, the sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, became highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries.

In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries. In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries.

In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympic organizing committee, becoame highly controversial not only in Japan but also amongin other foreign countries. In addition, sexist remarks of Yoshiro Mori, the president of Tokyo Olympic organizing committee, became highly controversial not only in Japan but also in other foreign countries.

'in other' would sound a better than among :) become> became as it has already happened

In addition, sexist remarks ofby Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries. In addition, sexist remarks by Yoshiro Mori, the president of the Tokyo Olympics organizing committee, have become highly controversial not only in Japan but also among foreign countries.

In my opinion, meaningless meetings and authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypes as well as gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society.


In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypeical views as well as gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society. In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypical views as well as gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society.

In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypes as well asnd who participate in gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society. In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypes and who participate in gender discrimination are really harmful in Japanese society.

"Have gender discrimination" tends to describe places or institutions more.

In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypeical ideas as well as gender discriminationg behavior are really harmful into Japanese society. In my opinion, meaningless meetings and the authority of elderly people who have strong stereotypical ideas as well as gender discriminating behavior are really harmful to Japanese society.

I can't help feel embarrassed to let foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is.


I can't help feeling embarrassed to letting foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is. I can't help feeling embarrassed letting foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is.

I can't help but feel embarrassed to let foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is. I can't help but feel embarrassed to let foreigners know how old-fashioned this country is.

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I can't help but feel embarrassed to let foreigners knowabout showing how old-fashioned this country is to foreigners. I can't help but feel embarrassed about showing how old-fashioned this country is to foreigners.

We have to deal with these issue by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination.


We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention ton unconscious discrimination. We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention to unconscious discrimination.

We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination. We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination.

We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination. We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention on unconscious discrimination.

"Implicit biases" sounds more idiomatic than "unconscious discrimination" to me, but it might be different in other cultural settings.

We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention ton unconscious discrimination. We have to deal with these issues by paying more attention to unconscious discrimination.

For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympic should be postponed until the pandemic is over.


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For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over. For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over.

For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over. For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over.

For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over. For these reasons, the Tokyo Olympics should be postponed until the pandemic is over.

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