I'm glad I have a hobby ilike learning English that always makes me feel fulfilled, that is learning English. I'm glad I have a hobby like learning English that always makes me feel fulfilled.

This highlights what the hobby is (learning English) by putting the two next to each other, it sounds more natural to me.

I'm glad I have a hobby ithat always makes me feel fulfilled, that. My hobby is learning English. I'm glad I have a hobby that always makes me feel fulfilled. My hobby is learning English.

I'm glad I have a hobby ithat always makes me feel fulfilled, thatwhich is learning English. I'm glad I have a hobby that always makes me feel fulfilled, which is learning English.

I have been learning English for hours at theround midnight. I have been learning English for hours around midnight.

"At" is more used for events where you don't choose to describe its length/duration (ex. "I eat at midnight").

I have been learning English for hours atin the middle of the night. I have been learning English for hours in the middle of the night.

I'm guessing this is what you mean.

I have been learning English for hours atin the midnight. I have been learning English for hours in the night.

I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign langwuages, especially English. I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign languages, especially English.

I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign langwuages, especially English. I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign languages, especially English.

I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign langwuages, especially English. I would not get tired because I found it interesting to learn foreign languages, especially English.

I thought I've got strengthten better than others at language learning. I thought I've gotten better than others at language learning.

I thought I got strengthink I have more tenacity than others at language learning. I think I have more tenacity than others at language learning.

The word "strength" is usually used for being physically strong. I wonder if the word "determination" or "tenacity" would work? That kind of strength is shown when you keep on doing something that is difficult, and you don't give up. I am guessing that because you talk about "effort" in the next sentence. If you think this now, then it should be in the present tense, like the next sentence.

I thought I got strengthink I am better than others at language learning. I think I am better than others at language learning.

It's still necessary for me to tmake an effort to deal with it. It's still necessary for me to make an effort to deal with it.

It's still necessary for me to take an effort to deal with it. It's still necessary for me to take an effort to deal with it.

The weather in China was a little bit hot recently, the top of thewith a high temperature isof 23 degrees Celsius, and thea low istemperature of 11 degrees Celsius. The weather in China was a little bit hot recently, with a high temperature of 23 degrees Celsius, and a low temperature of 11 degrees Celsius.

The weather in China was a little bit hot recently,; the top of thehigh temperature iwas 23 degrees Celsius, and the low iwas 11 degrees Celsius. The weather in China was a little bit hot recently; the high temperature was 23 degrees Celsius, and the low was 11 degrees Celsius.

If you want to end a sentence, you use a period. If you want to keep going, you use a comma. If you want to do something in between, you use a semicolon. Otherwise you need a comma and a conjunction (. . . recently, and. . . )

The weather in China was a little bit hot recently, the top of thehigh temperature is 23 degrees Celsius, and the low is 11 degrees Celsius. The weather in China was a little bit hot recently, the high temperature is 23 degrees Celsius, and the low is 11 degrees Celsius.

The spring festival is coming soon and all of us wasare excited. The spring festival is coming soon and all of us are excited.

The spring festival is coming soon, and all of us wasare excited. The spring festival is coming soon, and all of us are excited.

Here you need a comma before the conjunction. OR you could put a period after "soon" and start a new sentence.

The spring festival is coming soon and all of us wasare excited. The spring festival is coming soon and all of us are excited.

There is two myI have two wishes that: the first one is to get rich soon, and the second one is that my English getting improve quicklyo quickly improve my English. I have two wishes: the first one is to get rich soon, and the second one is to quickly improve my English.

":" is used here since a list of items (wishes) are described

These are ismy two my wishes that: the first one is that I get rich soon, and the second one is that my English getting improves quickly. These are my two wishes: the first one is that I get rich soon, and the second one is that my English improves quickly.

"Here are my two wishes" or "I have two wishes" would also work here.

There isare two my wishes that the first one is get rich soon and the second one is that my English getting improves quickly. There are two wishes that the first one is get rich soon and the second one is that my English improves quickly.

That's all myI want to talking about today. That's all I want to talk about today.

That's all myI want to talking about today. That's all I want to talk about today.

That's all myI want to talking about today. That's all I want to talk about today.