First of all, I want to thank everyone for helpeding and correcteding me. First of all, I want to thank everyone for helping and correcting me.

You could also say "everyone who helped and corrected me"

First of all, I want to thank everyone for helpeding and correcteding me. First of all, I want to thank everyone for helping and correcting me.

Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge. Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge.

Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge. Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge.

I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you ion this site what I did . I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you on this site what I did.

When talking about sites (either web or real), we usually say "on"

I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you ion this site what I did . I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you on this site what I did .

Yes, I was so excited to tell evreryone. Yes, I was so excited to tell everyone.

Yes, I was so excited to tell evreryone. Yes, I was so excited to tell everyone.

I wrote down what I did in amy daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype. I wrote down what I did in my daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype.

"a daily life" makes it sound like you have more than one daily life. You could also just say "what I did today"

I wrote down what I did in a daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype. I wrote down what I did in daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype.

wWe talspoked in French. We spoke in French.

"Talking" is more for like... the act of discussing (we talked about our days) . "Speaking" is about what kind of sounds are coming out of your mouth (we spoke in French). You can also use "speaking" like "talking" (We spoke about our days), but it's more formal.

Then, I read to her my paragraph. to her. Then I read my paragraph to her.

What you originally said wasn't wrong, but it sounds a little unnatural.

Then, I read to her my paragraph to her. Then, I read my paragraph to her.

She Sspecifically said. She specifically said

I can't believe it!! I can't believe it!!

I can't believe it!! I can't believe it!!

I aslo read online dictionarylso looked up the definitions of some words I didn't understand in the dictionary. I also looked up the definitions of some words I didn't understand in the dictionary.

"Reading the dictionary" implies that you're reading through it like a novel. You generally say you "looked up something [the definitions of words you didn't understand] in the dictionary".

I aslo read online dictionarylso looked up some words I didn't understand in an online dictionary. I also looked up some words I didn't understand in an online dictionary.

I figure I am going to read a book after sending an email to a friend I am going to read some pages of a book. I figure I am going to read a book after sending an email to a friend.

The way you said the sentence before works better in speech than in writing. It's not wrong, but it's hard to put proper punctuation in. Also, you don't have to say that you're going to read some pages of a book. Most people will assume that you aren't going to read the whole thing at once lol

I figure after sending an email to a friend I am going to read some pages of a book. I figure after sending an email to a friend I am going to read some pages of a book.

I am hopethankfully for you and the website. I am thankful for you and the website.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say here, so I just assumed.

I am hopefully for you and the website. I am hopefully for you and the website.

I'm unsure what the exact meaning of this sentence is.