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An Ordinary man

These days, there are some Japanese women who are looking for "an ordinary man" in dating apps. They assume that people everywhere can meet their satisfaction, but they don't realize that their minimum requirements are too high. An ordinary man, with which they hope to meet, earns more than five million yens, graduates from well-known university, looks like the famous popular singer, is always neat and taller than 170cm and so on. It seems that there men account for less than 5% of the population of around 30's men.
My female friend from my neighborhood is also looking for such a high value man. She has confidence in her looking and talking, so she won't doubt that she can't have crush on a high value man. Surprisingly, though she used to be indifferent to how a boyfriend looks and only pay attention to his status and ability to create wealth which can accept her habit of wasting the money, she becomes to value his looking as well since it's suitable age to get married.

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Feb. 1, 2021

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An Ordinary man


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If it's a title and we're capitalizing the first letter of all the nouns, we'd capitalize it like this.

These days, there are some Japanese women who are looking for "an ordinary man" in dating apps.


These days, there are some Japanese women who are looking for "an ordinary man" in dating apps. These days, some Japanese women are looking for "an ordinary man" in dating apps.

or These days, there are Japanese women looking for "an ordinary man" in dating apps.

They assume that people everywhere can meet their satisfaction, but they don't realize that their minimum requirements are too high.


They assume that people everywhere can meet their satisfactionrequirements, but they don't realize that their minimum requirements are too high. They assume that people everywhere can meet their requirements, but they don't realize that their minimum requirements are too high.

or They assume that people everywhere can satisfy their requirements, but they don't realize that their minimum requirements are too high.

An ordinary man, with which they hope to meet, earns more than five million yens, graduates from well-known university, looks like the famous popular singer, is always neat and taller than 170cm and so on.


An ordinary man, with whichom they hope to meet, earns more than five million yens, graduates from a well-known university, looks like thea famous popular singer, and is always neat and taller than 170cm and so on. An ordinary man, with whom they hope to meet, earns more than five million yen, graduates from a well-known university, looks like a famous popular singer, and is always neat and taller than 170cm and so on.

"Whom" is for people while "which" is for inanimate objects.

It seems that there men account for less than 5% of the population of around 30's men.


It seems that there menas if men like this account for less than 5% of the population of aroundmen in their 30's men. It seems as if men like this account for less than 5% of men in their 30's.

My female friend from my neighborhood is also looking for such a high value man.


My female friend from my neighborhood is also looking for such a high value man like this. My female friend from my neighborhood is also looking for a high value man like this.

In Japanese, I can see how we'd use こんな but in English we usually put "like this" after the noun.

She has confidence in her looking and talking, so she won't doubt that she can't have crush on a high value man.


She has confidence in her lookings and talkingspeaking ability, so she won'thas no doubt that she can't have crush on date a high value man. She has confidence in her looks and speaking ability, so she has no doubt that she can date a high value man.

Surprisingly, though she used to be indifferent to how a boyfriend looks and only pay attention to his status and ability to create wealth which can accept her habit of wasting the money, she becomes to value his looking as well since it's suitable age to get married.


Surprisingly, though she used to be indifferent to how a boyfriend looks and only payid attention to his status and his ability to create wealth - which can acceptwould tolerate her habit of wasting the money -, she behas comes to value his lookings as well since it's a suitable age to get married. Surprisingly, though she used to be indifferent to how a boyfriend looks and only paid attention to his status and his ability to create wealth - which would tolerate her habit of wasting money -, she has come to value his looks as well since it's a suitable age to get married.

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