Oct. 25, 2021
1st anniversary
Today is the first anniversary of my family coming to this country. In the past year, my family and I have experienced difficulties, happiness and growth. We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place. Thanks my family for their love in the past year, thanks friends and teachers for their helping. I hope I can do better next year.
1st anniversary
Suggestion:
First Anniversary
Today is the first anniversary of my family coming to this country.
In the past year, my family and I have experienced difficulties, happiness and growth.
We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place.
Suggestion:
We have a home. It is very simple, not luxurious, but it is warm. We have integrated into the local life and study culture, and have made many new friends. We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year. We have fallen in love with it.
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I'm not sure why you have used semi-colons (;) in this text. I have read you other journals and you don't use semi-colons there. In this particular text here, the more appropriate punctuation is the full-stop.
Thanks to my family for their love in the past year, and thanks to my friends and teachers for their helping they have given me.
I hope I can do better next year.
Feedback
Thank you. Keep going! The more you practise, the better you'll become!
Sincerely,
mjm
Oct. 25, 2021
Thank you mjm.
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Today is the first anniversary of my family coming to this country. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the past year, my family and I have experienced difficulties, happiness and growth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place. We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place. Suggestion: We have a home. It is very simple, not luxurious, but it is warm. We have integrated into the local life and study culture, and have made many new friends. We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year. We have fallen in love with it. _________________ I'm not sure why you have used semi-colons (;) in this text. I have read you other journals and you don't use semi-colons there. In this particular text here, the more appropriate punctuation is the full-stop. |
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Thanks my family for their love in the past year, thanks friends and teachers for their helping. Thanks to my family for their love in the past year, and thanks to my friends and teachers for the |
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I hope I can do better next year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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