Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and skinnythin. Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and thin.

skinny sometimes has a negative feeling.

Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and skinnpretty. Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and pretty.

Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and skinnylender. Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and slender.

Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and skinnylender. Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and slender.

"Skinny" works, but it feels a little more like a health condition. Something like "slender" or "slim" might work better.

Here we go, again. Here we go, again.

Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me but it's what sells, and I wouldn't like to boringe you. Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me but it's what sells, and I wouldn't like to bore you.

Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells, and I wouldn't like to. I don't want to be boring you. Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells. I don't want to be boring.

Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are justonly about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells, and I wouldn't likewant to boringe you. Maybe you´ll think that my posts are only about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells, and I wouldn't want to bore you.

Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me, but it is what sells, and I wouldn't likewant to boringe you. Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me, but it is what sells, and I wouldn't want to bore you.

Alternatively: "You might be thinking that all my posts..."

So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny. So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.

SoThis story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny. This story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.

So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny. So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.

We both go to dance classes. We both go to dance classes.

We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.

First part doesn't really make sense. What do you mean?

We are a dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. We are a dance couple and I like the way she dances with me.

We are a dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. We are a dance couple and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.

We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.

Present tense verbs in third person should usually end with an "s". "I dance, you dance, she dances, we dance, they dance."

Although, we danced, it´s not too much, but is a .It's progress- ,I guess. Although, we danced .It's progress,I guess.

Although we danced,We danced, and although it´s not too much, buit is a progress-, I guess. We danced, and although it´s not much, it is progress, I guess.

Although we danced, it´s not too wasn't much, b. But is at is progress-, I guess. Although we danced, it wasn't much. But it is progress, I guess.

Although we danced, it´s not too much, but is at is progress- I guess. Although we danced, it´s not much, but it is progress- I guess.

The teacher wants to change the dance couples,; if he does, I don´t know what will happen. The teacher wants to change the dance couples; if he does, I don´t know what will happen.

The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen. The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen.

it is now clear what you mean from earlier. but then it was not clear what 'dance couple' meant to me

The teacher wants to change the dance couples, i. If he does, I don´t know what will happen. The teacher wants to change the dance couples. If he does, I don´t know what will happen.

I wish for things to go well between sher and me,. I really like her and wannat to hang out together. I wish for things to go well between her and me. I really like her and want to hang out together.

I wishant things to go well between shme and meher, I really like her and wanna hang out together. I want things to go well between me and her, I really like her and wanna hang out together.

I wishhope things go well between sher and me, because I really like her and wanna hang out togetwith her. I hope things go well between her and me, because I really like her and wanna hang out with her.

"I wish", in this context, means you wish something had gone differently in the past. But "I hope" means you hope something goes a certain way in the future. "Wish" can also mean hoping for something in the future, but in that case it's pretty formal, and might be formatted differently: "I wish for things to go well...". This feels like something a royal figure or a very poetic person might say. I've corrected the ending to sound a little more natural. But otherwise, it's not wrong at all!

Maybe I´ll write you in the next post and tell what happened that night- s. Spoiler,: it was like "Project X". Maybe I´ll write you in the next post and tell what happened that night. Spoiler: it was like "Project X".

Maybe I´ll write for you in the next post what happened that night - spoiler, it was like "Project X". Maybe I´ll write for you in the next post what happened that night - spoiler, it was like "Project X".

But all went to trassouth after a party, there, some things happened and made it weird. But all went south after a party, there, some things happened and made it weird.

not wrong but "went to trash" is not an idiomatic phrase. 'went south' is a similar idiomatic

But all went to trash after a party, there, some things happened and made it weirdAfter a party, there, I was uncomfortable. After a party, there, I was uncomfortable.

But all went to trashpieces after a party, t where, some things happened and made it (our interactions) weird. But all went to pieces after a party where some things happened and made it (our interactions) weird.

But it all went to trash after a party, t. There, some things happened andthat made it weird. But it all went to trash after a party. There, some things happened that made it weird.

First part isn't wrong, but a more common idiom would be "it all went downhill". "It all went downhill after a party." "There", used in this way, would usually start a new sentence. "and" works at the end here, but "that" is just a little better in this sentence where we are talking about cause and effect.

Then we had a break for holly week. Then we had a break for holly week.

holly week? is that a holiday? do you mean the tree?

Then we had a break for hHolly week. Then we had a break for Holly week.

Then we had a break for holHoly wWeek. Then we had a break for Holy Week.

Then we had a break for holHoly wWeek. Then we had a break for Holy Week.

Please ignore this if you do actually mean "Holly". When I looked it up, I could only find "Holy Week", which just happened very recently.

I just saw her yesterday, where w. We danced, but not like always, and. I didn´t feel twhat match I had felt before. I just saw her yesterday. We danced, but not like always. I didn´t feel what I had felt before.

I just saw her yesterday, whereand we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that matchconnection I had felt before. I just saw her yesterday, and we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that connection I had felt before.

I just saw her yesterday, where and we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that match I had felt before. I just saw her yesterday and we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that match I had felt before.

I just saw her yesterday, where and we danced, but not like always, andbefore. I didn´t feel that match I had felt before. I just saw her yesterday and we danced, but not like before. I didn´t feel that match I had felt before.

A piece of advice I was given by an English teacher long ago was to always try to only have one "and" per sentence (not including "and's" that are in lists). It isn't something you HAVE to follow every time, especially not in very informal English, but it's a good general rule of thumb for making text feel cleaner. We didn't mention a place before, so "I just saw her yesterday, where we danced" implies that you saw her IN the place where you two danced. However, something like "I just saw her yesterday in the classroom, where we danced" would imply that you then danced with her right there. (Without that comma separating "classroom" and "where", however, it will be "...in the classroom where we danced", and the meaning will be similar to the first sentence again).